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#1 2009-08-19 03:08:16

Bridget
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From: The Internet
Registered: 2006-09-09
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[brent] Grand Experiment, The

[brent] Grand Experiment, The

Gregg wakes up one morning remembering nothing of the previous night. He quickly acquires a mind control drug and proceeds to start a new life with it.


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#2 2009-08-20 05:30:54

Jefferson
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From: East Coast, USA
Registered: 2006-12-03
Posts: 449

Re: [brent] Grand Experiment, The

Good story. Much enjoyed it. Thanks for the read. 3dsmile

-Jeff

(posted from Chapter 1)

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#3 2009-08-21 00:02:48

big_black_nemesis
Tipsy
Registered: 2009-08-18
Posts: 5

Re: [brent] Grand Experiment, The

Fun story.  Better living through chemicals.  How many chapters are you expecting?

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#4 2009-08-21 03:59:54

Brent
Tipsy
Registered: 2009-08-10
Posts: 4

Re: [brent] Grand Experiment, The

I don't plan on too many chapters if any. I have a idea to write a prequel about the night before but that's a little ways off. Anyway I am glad you enjoyed it.

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#5 2010-03-17 16:52:29

iccrmmkr
Inebriated
Registered: 2008-05-02
Posts: 18

Re: [brent] Grand Experiment, The

Very good start. Maybe in future chapters include him discovering information about his attacker.

(posted from Chapter 1)

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#6 2010-07-13 00:49:45

kidvoyeur1993
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Registered: 2009-09-16
Posts: 19

Re: [brent] Grand Experiment, The

i want this to continue

(posted from Chapter 1)


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