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#1 2008-10-20 06:22:40
[AngelPrincess] Mouthful Of Cock, A
[AngelPrincess] Mouthful Of Cock, A
Title says it all.
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#2 2008-10-20 06:43:21
- Storymaster69
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- From: Alberta, Canada
- Registered: 2006-11-07
- Posts: 329
Re: [AngelPrincess] Mouthful Of Cock, A
I was one of the beta readers for this story but I did enjoy it and the ending made me smile. Please keep 'em coming I want more more more!
(posted from Chapter 1)
Sex isn't the answer.
Sex is the question.
Yes is the answer.
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#3 2008-10-20 07:36:03
- NahtanoJ88
- Inebriated
- From: Around A Corner
- Registered: 2006-12-08
- Posts: 52
Re: [AngelPrincess] Mouthful Of Cock, A
Hehe Nice story and I have to agree with Storymaster about the ending I wasn't expecting that at all and was the funniest thing I've seen all day... Well Its 1:33 here but I meant since I've been awake. 
(posted from Chapter 1)
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#4 2008-10-20 07:42:46
- Khellendros
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- Registered: 2006-11-27
- Posts: 51
Re: [AngelPrincess] Mouthful Of Cock, A
This story was quite the mouthful to read. Good job.
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#5 2008-10-20 08:06:42
- Jefferson
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- From: East Coast, USA
- Registered: 2006-12-03
- Posts: 449
Re: [AngelPrincess] Mouthful Of Cock, A
Without a doubt, the best story I've ever read... and no, I'm not biased at all.
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#6 2008-10-22 22:44:42
- adamrtobias
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- Registered: 2008-04-05
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Re: [AngelPrincess] Mouthful Of Cock, A
Wonderfully original story. I loved that we were engaged in her mind and emotional environment just as much as in the physicality of what she was doing. Made it all the more interesting and arousing. Two last remarks.... Your ending was great! It changed the vibe of the whole story and had me grinning like a fat kid with cake, and lastly... Write More! Outstanding post!
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#7 2008-10-31 01:35:12
- unknown1000u2
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- Registered: 2008-02-04
- Posts: 76
Re: [AngelPrincess] Mouthful Of Cock, A
Real good, Angel. Hope you do more. These guys don't know that wasn't even your best work!
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#8 2008-11-09 05:38:10
- SteelRage
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- Registered: 2006-12-08
- Posts: 18
Re: [AngelPrincess] Mouthful Of Cock, A
What a twist!! I like! more please?
(posted from Chapter 1)
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....wow, this is the best I can come up with
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#9 2009-01-23 21:13:42
- Timotheos
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Re: [AngelPrincess] Mouthful Of Cock, A
Love the twist and I eagerly wait to see more. ^_^
~Tim
(posted from Chapter 1)
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#10 2009-06-22 15:41:21
- Dark Dracu
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Re: [AngelPrincess] Mouthful Of Cock, A
This was a splendid read, and had a quite interesting twist. I don't often like first person stories, but yours was more then good enough to captivate my attention.
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#11 2009-06-23 03:03:50
Re: [AngelPrincess] Mouthful Of Cock, A
That was fun
Thanx for sharing
"A scrupulous writer, in every sentence that he writes, will ask himself at least four questions, thus: 1. What am I trying to say? 2. What words will express it? 3. What image or idiom will make it clearer? 4. Is this image fresh enough to have an effect?" - George Orwell, Politics and the English Language, 1946
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#12 2012-03-16 22:15:24
- grandad_rufus
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Re: [AngelPrincess] Mouthful Of Cock, A
Nice short - made me chuckle
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