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#1 2009-02-14 07:12:19

Bridget
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Yours.

Yours.

Perfection in art.


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#2 2009-02-14 07:48:44

Khellendros
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Re: Yours.

Beautiful.

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#3 2009-02-14 11:52:12

DarkStage
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Registered: 2009-02-09
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Re: Yours.

I Like this one!

The sole desire of a true artist is not to create a 'pretty Picture', but to generate an emotion, as you have portrayed here.  The only true masterpiece would have to show unimaginable emotion without boundaries.  The only emotion that fits that category is true love.  True love can can be shown, but never portrayed.  True love is perfection. 

I enjoyed this, and agree.

The title...  hard to tell...  Submission to true perfection? 

DarkStage

(posted from Chapter 1)

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#4 2009-02-15 02:20:43

LAoW
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Registered: 2006-12-01
Posts: 450

Re: Yours.

DarkStage wrote:

I Like this one!

The sole desire of a true artist is not to create a 'pretty Picture', but to generate an emotion, as you have portrayed here.  The only true masterpiece would have to show unimaginable emotion without boundaries.  The only emotion that fits that category is true love.  True love can can be shown, but never portrayed.  True love is perfection. 

I enjoyed this, and agree.

The title...  hard to tell...  Submission to true perfection? 

DarkStage

(posted from Chapter 1)

Thank you very much for your kind words. As for the title, there's a reason for it. Call it what you will. 3dwink

Last edited by LAoW (2009-02-15 02:21:19)


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#5 2009-02-15 02:22:04

LAoW
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Re: Yours.

Khellendros wrote:

Beautiful.

Thank you, Sir.


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