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#1 2006-12-03 10:43:46

Bridget
Barmaid
From: The Internet
Registered: 2006-09-09
Posts: 769
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New Company Polices

New laws are put in place abolishing a person's ability to declare bankruptcy. Instead a person in financial difficulty signs up for a term indenture contract. See what happens to Susan when she does not properly research where she is agreeing to work to pay off her debts.

Please read and comment.


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#2 2006-12-16 17:25:17

dv8n
Wasted
From: East Texas
Registered: 2006-12-08
Posts: 118

Re: New Company Polices

this story is harsh
...very well wrote and entertaining...but harsh and if I may point out it falls in good with the "How to Corrupt People" forum discussion....if only we knew the answer was right here all along... I feel soooooo corrupted I have naughty thoughts running all thru my head and it's your story's fault   3dbig_smile


:lol:

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#3 2006-12-16 18:27:09

Storymaster69
Completely Blotto
From: Alberta, Canada
Registered: 2006-11-07
Posts: 329

Re: New Company Polices

Thanks,

I did this story as a way to logically have a boss be able to legally demand sexual favours of her employees.  It is a bit contrived I will admit but as long as it made sense that was the important thing.

Thanks for reading and I hope you will look at some of my other stories too.


Sex isn't the answer.
Sex is the question.
Yes is the answer.

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#4 2006-12-16 22:58:35

dv8n
Wasted
From: East Texas
Registered: 2006-12-08
Posts: 118

Re: New Company Polices

I'm definately gonna try...but it may take a little bit...I'm trying to read several author's I haven't yet

The only reason I found time last night was a nasty case of insomnia...I walked the floors all night long..and it seems to be happening more and more often... 3dsad

... the story was very intertaining....3dsmile    BUT I would rather sleep, no disrespect intended with that comment just tired... 

Thank you for your creativity and time...hope to read more soon


:lol:

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#5 2007-12-14 20:41:41

PapaGus
Tipsy
Registered: 2007-11-18
Posts: 4

Re: New Company Polices

I think, starting out the story with what appears to be an error in the title- POLICES rather than POLICIES - casts serious doubt as to the authors ability to edit and that of his editors.  If, on the other hand, that's an acerbic wittisism, I can deal with it.

(posted from Chapter 3 - Special Project)

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#6 2007-12-14 20:49:15

Eric Storm
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From: New Port Richey, FL
Registered: 2006-09-12
Posts: 5745
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Re: New Company Polices

PapaGus:

Read this: http://www.wolfpub.org/critiquing.php
Follow its guidelines.

Net Wolf


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#7 2007-12-15 00:46:03

siath
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Registered: 2006-09-17
Posts: 101

Re: New Company Polices

PapaGus you have been warned time after time. Take what Net Wolf has told you to do and DO IT. I don't know how much longer Net will put up with your disreguard of the various warnings and you ignoring the guide that you agreed to when you signed up here. However, I for one am just about at my end in dealing with you.

Keep up with what you're doing and I have a special place for you.

Sorry Net, for stepping on your toes, but he's not getting the hint.

Siath

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#8 2007-12-15 00:58:49

Storymaster69
Completely Blotto
From: Alberta, Canada
Registered: 2006-11-07
Posts: 329

Re: New Company Polices

PapaGus wrote:

I think, starting out the story with what appears to be an error in the title- POLICES rather than POLICIES - casts serious doubt as to the authors ability to edit and that of his editors.  If, on the other hand, that's an acerbic wittisism, I can deal with it.

<heavy sarcasm>
PapaGus thank you for the kick in the teeth.  It is deep and insightful comments like yours that encourage writers everywhere to share their ideas.  I can't believe how stupid it was of me to make such a glaring mistake like mix two letters like that.  Your comments have helped me greatly improve my story I'm sure when I repost it, people will be amazed with the great improvement.

I will admit you are the true master of witticism managing to work in a subtle joke like typing wittisism instead; not everyone could have pulled that one off.  My hat is off to you sir
</heavy sarcasm>

I now return you to your regularly scheduled program.


Sex isn't the answer.
Sex is the question.
Yes is the answer.

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#9 2007-12-18 00:03:29

advancewar
Wasted
From: New hampshire
Registered: 2007-02-05
Posts: 204

Re: New Company Polices

(/sarcasm) you mispelled the name, that being the most horible mistack in the world. i mean how could you do that its not like fingers can miss a key or anything
(/unsarcasm) its an awsome story 69 hope to see more like it


life=books

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#10 2007-12-18 00:54:37

Storymaster69
Completely Blotto
From: Alberta, Canada
Registered: 2006-11-07
Posts: 329

Re: New Company Polices

Thanks advancewar.  I'm glad you liked it.


Sex isn't the answer.
Sex is the question.
Yes is the answer.

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#11 2022-03-17 05:13:05

digdoggggg
Tipsy
Registered: 2022-03-14
Posts: 1

Re: New Company Polices

Great story. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

(posted from Chapter 3 - Special Project)

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