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I have no idea what the 'surprise' ending is going to be, but I've liked the story so far.
(posted from Chapter 7 My Soul)
and i guess i should have looked at the post date of the story. oh well.
The "Prospective Authors" section is now closed. The stories were left there to encourage those who had posted there to keep writing.
I didn't even realize that I was in the Prospective Authors section. did a search on MC. now i know what the  brackets mean.
Yes, it was how we included the author's name in those stories.
Unfortunately, I don't think Fledgling is still around.
It took me a little while to appreciate the story but quickly concluded that 'city' means 'body' and 'home' means 'cell'. The latest chapter practically confirms the thought.
I presume the attraction is the beginning of telepathy.
A good story that makes you think rather than just float along.
Its a shame its been abandoned.
(posted from the Item Information Page)
It is a shame people have to leave negative comments on everything the read or see. People are mean at heart and don’t want anyone to be mean to them. So don’t pay attention to the negative comments. Read them and take it with a grain of salt.
You are a talented writer, the story line here is great. I am looking forward to the ending.
(posted from Chapter 6 Master the Tempest is Raging)