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#1 2012-10-24 01:39:50

From: The Internet
Registered: 2006-09-09
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Birthday gift

Birthday gift

A mother gives her son a girl for his birthday

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#2 2012-10-29 10:46:38

Sir Steffan
Registered: 2012-09-08
Posts: 12

Re: Birthday gift

So far so good. Keep it up it has promise!!

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#3 2021-08-15 09:26:12

Registered: 2021-08-13
Posts: 3

Re: Birthday gift

This used to happen in our culture years ago. At least they both seemed happy it happening. You captured the boys emotions very well but that's not hard,men have a one track mind. The girl you do better now than you did then. Be interesting to see if it turned into a love story or just another story of an exploited little girl.

(posted from Chapter 1)



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