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#1 2017-07-18 00:31:35

From: The Internet
Registered: 2006-09-09
Posts: 592

Means to an End, A

A Means to an End

Jaime Little is one of the hottest up-and-coming porn starlets in Hollywood... until one bad day upends everything. But when she flees town to clear her head, she begins to find the life she always dreamed of in the place she least expected to find it.

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#2 2017-07-19 03:15:55

Registered: 2016-06-29
Posts: 8

Re: Means to an End, A

Great story.  I enjoyed this read from beginning to end.

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#3 2021-05-30 06:17:53

Registered: 2021-04-15
Posts: 8

Re: Means to an End, A

I enjoyed this short story.  Just enough adult content to keep it spicy.  The story had a sound concept and plot.  I would say my only critique would be "some of the story lacked a depth".  Some of the exchanges between characters tended to be a little predicable and vanilla.  With that said, it was actually a nice read without having to be totally immersed in the story to keep track of all the sub plots. I would have liked to have seen more of the story have been invested with the young girl that was lookin for some fun.  I feel you left an awful lot of that story go untold.

(posted from Part 2)



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