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#1 2018-09-11 17:33:27

Bridget
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Registered: 2006-09-09
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Kimmy, My Cumslut

Kimmy, My Cumslut

A snow storm keeps a young girl and her father stuck at home together.  An innocent game becomes something more, and a dirty little secret that the girl has been keeping finally comes to light.

Note: This is a story I once released on xnxx.com, slightly modified, but already fully completed.  I'll be releasing new chapters periodically, until all eight chapters are posted.  This is the first story in a planned "universe" that will span many different stories and genres.

If the tags and description do not make it clear, this story is about a man and his young daughter.  If this is not the type of story you like, please do not bother reading it and commenting how much you don't like it.  This story is not for you.


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#2 2018-09-17 12:20:54

trknup
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Registered: 2013-05-11
Posts: 23

Re: Kimmy, My Cumslut

I remember this story before xnxx got stupid with their censorship rules and drove off a lot of good writers.

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#3 2018-09-20 23:49:21

DoomCock
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Re: Kimmy, My Cumslut

I'll take the implied comment, thank you very much. ^_^  As I said in the note for the story, it's already written, but when I posted it originally on xnxx, I noticed a few errors here or there and I wanted to give one more editing pass before I submitted it here.  So as I go through each chapter one last time, I'll post them.

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#4 2018-11-29 19:54:24

DoomCock
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Re: Kimmy, My Cumslut

It took me a whole lot longer to edit this than it really should have, but I finally had a chance to post the last chapters.  There will be more to come from this "universe", with new and interesting characters.  And Kimmy will be back in a later story.

Also, I've been wrestling with the idea of setting up a Patreon to help me be able to write more often.  If anyone would be interested in becoming a Patron (I was only going to start at $1 per month/chapter), message me so I know if there's interest.

Enjoy!

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#5 2018-11-29 22:41:47

Eric Storm
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From: New Port Richey, FL
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Re: Kimmy, My Cumslut

DoomCock:

Might want to put the bit about Patreon at the bottom of the story description, to make it permanently visible.  If this thread gets active, your notice will disappear from people's view pretty fast.

Just a suggestion, of course.

Eric Storm

PS: to edit the story description, go into the account management section for contributors, and choose the "Edit Item" menu item.


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#6 2018-12-01 21:50:26

DoomCock
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Re: Kimmy, My Cumslut

What a wonderful idea!  Done and done!

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#7 2021-02-09 16:22:42

mydarkside
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Registered: 2021-01-26
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Re: Kimmy, My Cumslut

What a beautiful story told with so much love and tenderness. I don't know who is better off, Kimmy or Daddy.

(posted from Kimmy)

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#8 2021-02-26 16:03:46

mydarkside
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Re: Kimmy, My Cumslut

This is a response to the complete story.
I came to the story because of the two characters and their ages and relationship and those were well portrayed and I liked the first couple of chapters but then for me things changed and I didn’t like the rest as much.
I was glad that daddy admits he’s a paedo, and doesn’t try and shift any blame onto Kimmy for what happens. That was good writing and a nice character enhancement.
The punishment scene was to violent (for me) and as Kimmy said “Daddy you spoilt it.” Yes Kimmy needed punishing and a beating was a nice touch but after that for me daddy came across as a sadistic bully. He professes love for Kimmy but doesn’t show it.
If the intention was to show daddy as a bully then you achieved that perfectly.
I think that Kimmy deserves something better than her daddy.
I thought the story was well crafted and I suppose for me to write this review meant it stirred emotions and that is a good thing.
I know we’re not encouraged to leave negative reviews but I feel if an opinion is heartfelt and reasons for the negativity are given then that is valid commentary.

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