The Pub Discussion Board

DoomCock wrote:

If this is an old story and all you need is editing before reposting, I volunteer my services as editor to get this posted up here sooner.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

That is true, it's an old story. One of the first I wrote and posted. What I have been doing is going through the chapters and trying to apply the things I have learned since 2009 without rewriting the story. I'm not sure that is something you'd be able to do. If you wanted to, you could go read the only chapter left on sexstories, which has already been redone and posted here. That will give you an idea of what I have been doing.

I have been so busy with life that any spare time I get has been going toward Potential, so the reworking of My Neighbor's has ground to a halt. I hate that because I want it to be as good as it can be. I have given desperate fans the original OpenOffice files and let them read my poorly written stuff.

Wow, hot as fuck! I think this is even better than Potential, considering how long ago it was since you wrote it.

I wish I had a sister like either of these two.

(posted from Chapter 2: Brains, Balls or Just Plain Evil?)

It seems like gardening payments have a different way of being taken in the USA.

Joe needs to do Susan ASAP, please

(posted from Chapter 4: What happened in Pennsylvania?)

mydarkside love the username, and My Neighbors is from my darker side :-)
Thanks for the comments. I guess I should get off my ass and post the rest of these chapters. All they need is a little proofing.

I enjoyed this story.  Started reading it a couple of years ago, then stopped.  Started re-reading s few days ago, and finished today.  I hope you will continue this story taking up when the characters are a few years older.  Thanks.

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ptbrainum wrote:

Wow, fantastic story, just finished chapter 19, is that the end or are there more chapters?  If more, how many chapters total?

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I suppose I should have put THE END at the end? Sorry, I wasn't really thinking. That is the story as I wrote it, except the new chapter 18, back in 2009. It was my first story. At the end of 2009 I had stuff going on that prevented me from writing, so I ended it there and went away from writing for over 5 years. There is still a lot of potential for My Neighbor's Incest, but I don't see myself continuing it.

On that note, I'm really having a difficult time for the past few months and they only seem to be getting worse. I'm trying to get back to writing, but feel like everything is against me. Life seems to be in the spin cycle and I can get out of the washer. I'll keep trying, and try to keep you posted, but I can't promise anything else right now.

Really well done for a first story…enjoyable

(posted from Chapter 1: The Attic)

Have been trying to read every author's entries alphabetically and I am 3/4 of the way through. But I keep rereading this story. It is an emotional powerhouse and I have been able to glean more with every subsequent reading. Bistander has let us all know he would not be adding a continuation of this story. I feel it deserves many more chapters. How do we convince you to continue? I wish I knew.

(posted from Chapter 19: We Can Share)

Eric Storm wrote:

Dadrepus wrote:

How do we convince you to continue? I wish I knew.

Throwing heaping gobs of cash in his direction might work...  Just sayin'...



Eric Storm

That might work. If I got paid for the hours I've spent writing that series and Potential at the rate I made as an IT specialist, I'd buy GoDaddy for Eric.

Dadrepus and all the others who have been asking for the last ten years, I'm not sure I could ever add anything that would do that story justice. I once took a stab at something called Jasmine's Beach Therapy. It takes place in a different location and Jasmine meets a psychologist named Cindy, who takes Jasmine to her house. At least two versions reached quite a few words, but those stories kept going down rabbit holes and I could never bring them to an end.

That was ten years ago, and potential came about out of that work. That's been my life ever since. I'm not sure I could ever get back into the same mindset and write more MNI without Potential creeping in. Plus, MNI takes place before cell phones. They don't use computers in the story. How did that even happen?

Okay, it'll probably never happen, but heaps of money or any money might motivate me after Potential finishes. That should be soon.

All I can say is what a wonderful story, and so nice to have a happy ending. I actually got so tied up in the characters I wished I was one of them, I kept thinking back to my childhood and early teens. So well written

(posted from Chapter 19: We Can Share)

Yo know, this is the third time I have read this and it still brings tears to my eyes. You may not realize what a gem of a story this is. I hope you some ay find the time to add to this story but if not, this is a wonderfully uplifting ending.

(posted from Chapter 19: We Can Share)

Bistander,
I am sorry to hear you may have "lost the mental and emotional threads" to this masterpiece. Hopefully, the "life stuff" which is occupying your time isn't daunting or harmful to you. As a fan of this and other Potential stories by you, I can only say that I hope you continue with this one. It has surprisingly touched sympathetic nerves in me. Thank you for your time, and keep writing! You have great talent.

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