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#376 2020-07-17 22:25:14

Eric Storm
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Re: Potential

Hey, Soul_less:

For enough of a bribe, I can threaten him into it for you.... mwahahahahahahahahhahaaaaaa.....

misch_smiley

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#377 2020-07-18 00:17:03

bistander
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Re: Potential

Thanks Eric for a good laugh. I needed that.

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#378 2020-07-18 02:09:46

Soul_less327
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Re: Potential

I mean, I do have Paypal.....

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#379 2020-07-18 02:15:39

Soul_less327
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Re: Potential

Seriously though bistander, you could always go back and add the love scenes into chapter 33 and re-release it with bonus content that you totally planned on adding in waaaay before anyone asked for it.    3dbig_smile 

People who complain about your chapters being too long obviously have way too much to do in their lives and should probably chill out a little.   3dwink

I will always make time to read a great story.

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#380 2020-07-18 02:19:50

bistander
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Re: Potential

LOL.

I don't need to go back when I can recap, or have a follow up in 34.

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#381 2020-08-23 20:05:48

Rocker_Ron
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Re: Potential

Can’t wait for the next installment. Great story line. Thank you for sharing.

(posted from Potential Chapter 33: Photograph)

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#382 2020-08-25 21:16:51

southpaw1430
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Posts: 15

Re: Potential

Excellent story.  Thanks

(posted from Chapter 1: The Pantie Fetish)

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#383 2020-08-29 13:22:45

southpaw1430
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Re: Potential

I have enjoyed this story.  Just finished ch. 33.  I hope there is more.  Good character development.  Thanks.

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#384 2020-08-31 17:41:46

bistander
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Re: Potential

southpaw1430 wrote:

I have enjoyed this story.  Just finished ch. 33.  I hope there is more.  Good character development.  Thanks.

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Thanks ya'll for the comments. Yup, there is more. I'm working on 34 now. Had a bit of downtime after the last chapter, so it's not as fast as the last time.

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#385 2020-10-02 06:11:34

wekfhj24
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Re: Potential

Hello there! I wanted to know how long to wait for the continuation of a wonderful series of stories?

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#386 2020-10-04 19:37:56

bistander
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Re: Potential

wekfhj24 wrote:

Hello there! I wanted to know how long to wait for the continuation of a wonderful series of stories?

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Don't wait any longer. Just go read it and tell me how great it was.

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#387 2020-10-08 12:54:02

wekfhj24
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Re: Potential

It was amazing! I read it in one breath. It seemed that part was small. I want more. Especially looking forward to the development of the Evan-Miss style line, I want something hot. Thank you very much! The author is the best!

(posted from Potential Chapter 34: A Great Idea)

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#388 2020-10-10 22:14:31

bistander
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Re: Potential

If you saw Potential 34 pop up as new that's because I fix a few typos.

I was planning on posting 35 this weekend, but I was quite ill all week. I'll get on the editing/proofreading tomorrow. Shouldn't take long.

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#389 2020-10-11 04:30:34

wekfhj24
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Re: Potential

bistander wrote:

If you saw Potential 34 pop up as new that's because I fix a few typos.

I was planning on posting 35 this weekend, but I was quite ill all week. I'll get on the editing/proofreading tomorrow. Shouldn't take long.

Hello! Thanks! I wish you strong health! All the best to you!

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#390 2020-10-17 15:34:08

bistander
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Re: Potential

wekfhj24 wrote:

Hello! Thanks! I wish you strong health! All the best to you!

Thank you, much.

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#391 2020-10-17 18:12:31

southpaw1430
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Re: Potential

Excellent Chapter.  This is one of my favorite stories.  Thanks.

(posted from Potential Chapter 35: The Game)

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#392 2020-11-26 03:33:28

coachc32
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Registered: 2016-11-19
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Re: Potential

I noticed that it has been awhile since anyone has commented on here. Just thought I would take a moment to wish you a Happy Thanksgiving tomorrow.  I hope all is well!  Of course I have to check on the status of the next chapter while I'm here... Can we expect an amazing Christmas gift from you in the form of Chapter 36?

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#393 2020-11-28 18:10:52

bistander
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Re: Potential

coachc32 wrote:

to wish you a Happy Thanksgiving tomorrow.  Can we expect an amazing Christmas gift from you in the form of Chapter 36?

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Thank you for the comment, and the good wish for Thanksgiving. It was fine, although I spent it at home by myself. I made chicken soup.

As for 36, I sure as hell hope so. If not, something went terribly wrong. It has been a tough ride the past month with a great deal of pain in my arm, which makes it hard to be creative, but I think the break from sitting at the keyboard and my new office chair have helped.

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#394 2020-12-15 01:53:03

mwahoo
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Registered: 2017-12-30
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Re: Potential

Dear Santa. For Xmas all we want is chapter36-40_of our favorite story Potential. And please kill off John.......and a red Ryder rate rifle with a,compass in the stock.

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#395 2020-12-15 08:44:49

Eric Storm
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Re: Potential

You'll shoot your eye out with that thing!

Eric Storm


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#396 2021-01-11 16:23:39

Justheretoread
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Registered: 2020-11-16
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Happy new years to one and all, just wanted to say, I love love love this story!! So well written it just sucks you in!! Can't wait for the next chaper(s).
Regards
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#397 2021-03-01 11:54:54

spanbot
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Registered: 2021-02-12
Posts: 1

Re: Potential

Hi there,
just wanted to tell you that i absolutely love this story.
Youre doing an incredible job.
Thanks 3dwink

Edit: can you tell us when we can roughly expect the next part?
Thanks again 3dbig_smile

Last edited by spanbot (2021-03-02 21:20:09)

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#398 2021-03-19 17:23:09

Kenco
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Registered: 2021-03-19
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Re: Potential

Hi. Reader complaints about chapter length are meaningless. These sound rather like the king of Austria Hungary telling Wolfgang Mozart that his music contains too many notes. Your writing is not too long or too short, it’s what’s necessary to convey the story you’re telling. If I were you I wouldn’t even bother to address that non-issue any further. Readers who believe that the overall story itself is too long to read [too many chapters] should be reading something else.

To me, you’re one of the best writers of erotic fiction I’ve found. I think of your writing style as erotic, not porn. The quality of your writing, the multiple plots, the character development and much more are all part of any good novel. Keep up your good work, I’m looking forward to reading as much of your material as I can find. All the best.

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#399 2021-03-23 16:39:49

bistander
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Registered: 2015-09-03
Posts: 239

Re: Potential

Kenco wrote:

Hi. Reader complaints about chapter length are meaningless. These sound rather like the king of Austria Hungary telling Wolfgang Mozart that his music contains too many notes. Your writing is not too long or too short, it’s what’s necessary to convey the story you’re telling. If I were you I wouldn’t even bother to address that non-issue any further. Readers who believe that the overall story itself is too long to read [too many chapters] should be reading something else.

To me, you’re one of the best writers of erotic fiction I’ve found. I think of your writing style as erotic, not porn. The quality of your writing, the multiple plots, the character development and much more are all part of any good novel. Keep up your good work, I’m looking forward to reading as much of your material as I can find. All the best.

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Thank you, and that's all that needs to follow such an awesome comment. Thank you.

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#400 2021-04-16 02:46:46

Horsepower325
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Registered: 2020-12-21
Posts: 3

Re: Potential

This is quite possibly the Mona Lisa of erotic literature. I love it. I stayed up the entirety of the night devouring this masterpiece. The character development, the emotion that is so thick you just feel like you could reach out and touch it, the suspense of waiting to see what happens next, it makes for a perfect work of art. I can't wait for more. As someone who has dealt with the whole learning disability thing myself, I must say, Bravo.

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