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#1 2009-02-23 12:46:45

Bridget
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I Think She Wants Me to Take Her (Story Challenge One entry)

I Think She Wants Me to Take Her (Story Challenge One entry)

This is an entry for Story Challenge One. 

Billy thinks Lucy wants him to pay a visit to her school.  Bobby offers to help. 


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#2 2009-02-24 04:38:07

Black Rose
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Re: I Think She Wants Me to Take Her (Story Challenge One entry)

Pretty short for you, but I applaud you taking the challenge on!  I especially liked the bit about the porcupines.  That made me happy.


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#3 2009-03-29 16:41:34

Corvis
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Re: I Think She Wants Me to Take Her (Story Challenge One entry)

Thank you, Black Rose 3dsmile.  I'm happy my super short story amused you.

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#4 2020-09-01 05:50:07

kojak1818
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Re: I Think She Wants Me to Take Her (Story Challenge One entry)

Bloody marvelous!

(posted from Chapter 1)

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