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#1 2006-12-07 01:58:33

Bridget
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Megan Johanson, Bio-noire Bioengineer

A morbidly obese man, a killer virus and the female bioengineer he turns to.

Please read and comment.

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#2 2006-12-07 07:55:10

Neitherspace
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Registered: 2006-12-03
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Re: Megan Johanson, Bio-noire Bioengineer

good but the chaps are too short

(posted from Chapter 2)


"I figure that if you can't write decent dialogue for the devil, maybe you shouldn't be a writer."-Richard Kadrey

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#3 2006-12-08 02:43:48

Black Rose
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Re: Megan Johanson, Bio-noire Bioengineer

Since this story was originally only the first chapter, which is more of a drabble than anything else and the second section wasn't ever supposed to exist... fair enough.  It's not going to make me change anything, but I suppose it's a valid thing to say.  Thanks for bothering.


Black Rose

"Being a writer is a very peculiar sort of a job: it's always you versus a blank sheet of paper (or a blank screen) and quite often the blank piece of paper wins." Neil Gaiman

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#4 2007-07-13 05:12:29

Black Rose
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Re: Megan Johanson, Bio-noire Bioengineer

Does anybody care at all about this?  Because I wrote another short chapter-like thing and I could post it, but I'm not going to go to the trouble of fixing a few minor things and converting it if nobody cares about reading more.


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"Being a writer is a very peculiar sort of a job: it's always you versus a blank sheet of paper (or a blank screen) and quite often the blank piece of paper wins." Neil Gaiman

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#5 2007-07-13 06:57:54

J.A.W.
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Re: Megan Johanson, Bio-noire Bioengineer

Black Rose wrote:

Does anybody care at all about this?

YES!!  I thought this was the best of your writing, and the story itself had a great deal of potential.  I definitely want to see more.  The only reason I didn't comment was that I read it before I got on the forums.

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#6 2007-07-13 23:53:34

Storymaster69
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Re: Megan Johanson, Bio-noire Bioengineer

Please please pleeeeease post it.  It has been too long since I've had my Black Rose fix! 3dsmile


Sex isn't the answer.
Sex is the question.
Yes is the answer.

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#7 2007-07-14 22:39:35

Imagineer
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Re: Megan Johanson, Bio-noire Bioengineer

Storymaster69 wrote:

It has been too long since I've had my Black Rose fix! 3dsmile

You should have gotten the extended warranty.

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#8 2007-10-31 05:03:24

Black Rose
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Re: Megan Johanson, Bio-noire Bioengineer

I will warn you in advance that this part's rough.  I couldn't be bothered to fix anything in this part yet, you see.  Come on... cheer me up or something, will you?

(posted from Chapter 3)


Black Rose

"Being a writer is a very peculiar sort of a job: it's always you versus a blank sheet of paper (or a blank screen) and quite often the blank piece of paper wins." Neil Gaiman

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#9 2007-11-02 19:39:24

Loki
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Registered: 2006-12-10
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Re: Megan Johanson, Bio-noire Bioengineer

I like it Black Rose. It has the potential to be a great story. I love your way with words as well.

(posted from Chapter 3)

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#10 2007-11-03 04:39:01

Storymaster69
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Re: Megan Johanson, Bio-noire Bioengineer

Hey BR.  I just re-read chapter 1 and for the first time chapters 2 and 3 and I am still loving this story.  This story has lots of potential and I look forward to seeing what you do with it.

Keep up the good work


Sex isn't the answer.
Sex is the question.
Yes is the answer.

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#11 2007-11-03 21:19:31

RedAbyss
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Registered: 2007-06-23
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Re: Megan Johanson, Bio-noire Bioengineer

just read your story and thought it was good, i'm not verry good at giving comments, witch means that i really have to like it before i post.

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#12 2007-11-05 09:01:33

advancewar
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Re: Megan Johanson, Bio-noire Bioengineer

hey we need more plllllzzzzz its shaping up to be a very good storie and i wanna read moooooore


life=books

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#13 2007-11-05 09:02:43

advancewar
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Re: Megan Johanson, Bio-noire Bioengineer

ignore my whining im posting this at 4am and im starting to get groggy later


mooooooooore


life=books

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#14 2011-02-21 07:00:33

Cenobite829
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Re: Megan Johanson, Bio-noire Bioengineer

Great Story and I hope you write more.

(posted from Chapter 3)


Jigsaw: If you're good at anticipating the human mind. It leaves nothing to chance

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#15 2020-08-27 07:20:34

kojak1818
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Re: Megan Johanson, Bio-noire Bioengineer

lousy place to dump this f*****g story. You were just getting started.

(posted from Chapter 3)

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