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#26 2010-11-30 05:45:31

stevelp
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Re: Artifacts I

Great story, I hope there are more stories of the ring bearers.

(posted from Epilogue)

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#27 2010-11-30 05:48:58

Eric Storm
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Re: Artifacts I

I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Eventually, someday, RSN*, I'll get around to writing Artifacts II - IV.

Eric Storm

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#28 2010-11-30 21:19:41

lordalpha
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Re: Artifacts I

Yes, and the day you do finish a first chapter of Artifacts II, I think I will brainmelt. I like that one A LOT! Oh well, it will happen, RSN.


If you haven't read Artifacts yet. DO EETTT! DO EET NAAAOOWWWWW!!!

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#29 2010-12-20 10:11:09

boyhwayscpl
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Registered: 2010-12-17
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Re: Artifacts I

great story is there more to come

(posted from Chapter 1)

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#30 2010-12-20 10:13:53

Eric Storm
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Re: Artifacts I

Eventually...

Glad you enjoyed the story.

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#31 2010-12-21 07:40:03

boyhwayscpl
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Re: Artifacts I

looking forward to it even if it takes 10 years(haha) keep up the great work.

thanks for the time you take out of your life to give as all some joy

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#32 2010-12-21 08:56:54

Eric Storm
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Re: Artifacts I

And... if it should take... 11 years?  3dangel

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#33 2010-12-21 10:54:52

lordalpha
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Re: Artifacts I

Well then thats when we take out the chimney stocking full of nickels!

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#34 2012-05-10 06:43:24

Kitsune
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Registered: 2012-05-07
Posts: 45

Re: Artifacts I

This is another one of your stories i read some where else but remember it being great so i will probably also re read this just to enjoy the smaller details i have forgotten.

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#35 2012-11-07 01:51:10

Wicked Storm
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From: New Orleans
Registered: 2012-06-15
Posts: 367

Re: Artifacts I

Just finished reading it a few hours ago. And I have to say I looked for Artifacts II lol. But that's cool that you have other projects that need finishing first. I love the stories you do they are always very well written and with idea's that often are completely unique in there own right. Keep writing Eric. Your stuff rocks.


In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly.

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#36 2012-11-20 04:11:40

jhowe89
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Registered: 2009-09-01
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Re: Artifacts I

Got around to reading this one as well very cool story. I know you've said it on here that this one isn't on deck to be written but just curious do you think you'll follow Andrew as the main character or follow along with the new girl Reba? My hope is Andrew or both character lines diverging to a point as the ring's will becomes more clear about why it's chosen certain people maybe gathering the right kind to fight something who knows, not I. Anyway thanks for the interesting read.

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#37 2012-11-20 07:05:55

Eric Storm
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Re: Artifacts I

Actually, Artifacts 2 is likely to be written rather soon.

As to the plotlines, the name of the story series is "Artifacts", not "Andrew".  That should be all you need to know about that.

Eric Storm


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#38 2012-11-20 17:12:45

Wicked Storm
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Re: Artifacts I

Can't wait Artifacts 2 is one of your stories I have been wanting to see you write. ^_^


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#39 2012-12-01 04:34:07

jhowe89
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Re: Artifacts I

Looking forward to it.

Last edited by jhowe89 (2012-12-01 04:41:18)

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#40 2012-12-01 05:39:54

Black Rose
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From: The Edge of Nowhere
Registered: 2006-11-26
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Re: Artifacts I

Me too.  Although I'll have to go back and reread the first one, because I haven't read it in years.  But I remember it being good and that I was disappointed that there wasn't the next one forthcoming in short order.  Still...eventually is better than never.


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#41 2012-12-14 11:17:02

dannykaye
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Registered: 2012-11-22
Posts: 1

Re: Artifacts I

Just re read this,  it's still one of my favourites, thanks

(posted from Epilogue)

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#42 2015-10-27 00:02:17

Rescue25
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Registered: 2014-07-06
Posts: 122

Re: Artifacts I

I enjoyed the ending of ch 4. The enitre story was very entertaining.  WELL DONE.
Will there be a continuation?

B

(posted from Epilogue)

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#43 2015-10-27 02:51:23

Fenixreign
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Registered: 2014-08-02
Posts: 255

Re: Artifacts I

Mr. Storm has already begun posting Artifacts II, however it follows the ring, not the main character.

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#44 2016-07-16 12:42:32

Lacy69
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From: Lamar, Colorado
Registered: 2016-06-20
Posts: 38

Re: Artifacts I

excellent read!  Liked how you had the main character debate to what he was doing with the magic.  Would recommend to other readers

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#45 2016-07-16 18:18:50

Eric Storm
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Re: Artifacts I

Glad you enjoyed it.  I hope you enjoy the second one, if I ever get it finished.

Thanks for the feedback,
Eric Storm


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#46 2019-02-02 04:11:11

gadget
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From: Rancho Cucamonga, CA
Registered: 2007-07-19
Posts: 22

Re: Artifacts I

Would very much like to see more of this storyline. Magic has always been intriguing to me.

(posted from Epilogue)

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#47 2019-06-30 15:53:20

rfclibra64
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Registered: 2019-06-21
Posts: 2

Re: Artifacts I

excellant pace for a short story. makes me want more.

(posted from Chapter 3)

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#48 2019-06-30 17:51:53

Eric Storm
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Re: Artifacts I

... by "short story", I assume you mean a "short novel", since this isn't a "short story" as the term is used in literature...

In any case, I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Artifacts II will be made public at some point in the near(ish) future.

Eric Storm


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