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#1 2019-02-11 14:08:06
This Old House
This Old House
First the warning, this is a very edgy story. It involved horror, violence, snuff, rape, sexual violence, death caused by sexual violence all involving children from the age of 10. If this is upsetting or not to your liking don't read any further. Saying that for those that might read on the synopsis is:
A group of children break into a supposedly haunted house on Halloween. They expect to have fun, maybe feel a little fear. What they find is terror, pain and death! YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.
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#2 2019-02-11 14:11:22
- MDH1969
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- Registered: 2019-01-08
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Re: This Old House
As I said this is the edgy horror story I was talking about. Please take note of that warning I'm not kidding. I sort of let every dark thought I might ever have had loose with this story. All those things I would never do irl I put down in the story but all involving monsters. However, if that is to your liking then enjoy.
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#3 2019-03-01 16:00:21
- MDH1969
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Re: This Old House
Ok, this is the last chapter. To all those who've made it to the end, I guess the right term would be I hope you enjoyed it. And I hope the ending is right for the story. I feel it is.
(posted from Chapter 9)
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#4 2021-11-23 12:11:35
- Sserfing
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- Registered: 2021-11-23
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Re: This Old House
I don't usually read this kind of stuff, but I was interested in the novel because of the characters, and once I started reading it, I couldn't tear myself away. Thanks to the author for the creepy story) until the last I hoped that the sisters, or at least one of them... So that would be a spoiler)
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#5 2022-07-27 16:53:33
- MDH1969
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- Registered: 2019-01-08
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Re: This Old House
Glad you enjoyed it. And I'm glad the ending worked for you.
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