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#51 2018-09-04 05:58:26

DoomCock
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Re: Just a Taste is all it Takes

Chapter 17 was a great addition, but far too short for my taste.

A request: definitely revisit the mindscape and have him fuck his "daughter" some more.  That was hawt. 3dtongue

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#52 2018-09-09 05:41:57

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Re: Just a Taste is all it Takes

this story is perfect chapter 17 is to short for my taste. maybe for the future his daugher can be made real  and he can have his way with her in the real world

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#53 2018-09-26 03:25:38

James Marcus
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Re: Just a Taste is all it Takes

Chapter 19 and 20 will be posted on Friday.

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#54 2018-10-09 05:15:15

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Re: Just a Taste is all it Takes

When is the next part coming out

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#55 2018-10-09 05:20:37

James Marcus
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Re: Just a Taste is all it Takes

ctrigger30 wrote:

When is the next part coming out

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I'm now working on the next Chapter for Toy Master, then a few other stories, A Perfect ten, has two chapters in editing. I also plan on working the next chapter in Fateless sometime soon. So it might be a while before I get back to Just a Taste.

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#56 2018-10-16 07:56:44

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Re: Just a Taste is all it Takes

I have to say, there’s a few parts I had to skip over, over all the story was good, several misspellings, grammatical errors, I think even names got switched once.

However, aside from the really short chapters, the pedo sex, I managed to see a really good story. There’s a few things that make me think, “what in the hell?”. Which is fine cause it makes me think about the background, what’s happened up to this point, etc.

I personally feel that to much of the story was taken away from Aaron, they seemed like a good pair. If focused more on everybody and everything else. And the feelings for drew that had no bases was... well confusing to say the least. Over all well done. I look forward to more.

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#57 2018-10-17 04:26:09

James Marcus
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Re: Just a Taste is all it Takes

Elessar wrote:

I have to say, there’s a few parts I had to skip over, over all the story was good, several misspellings, grammatical errors, I think even names got switched once.

However, aside from the really short chapters, the pedo sex, I managed to see a really good story. There’s a few things that make me think, “what in the hell? . Which is fine cause it makes me think about the background, what’s happened up to this point, etc.

I personally feel that to much of the story was taken away from Aaron, they seemed like a good pair. If focused more on everybody and everything else. And the feelings for drew that had no bases was... well confusing to say the least. Over all well done. I look forward to more.

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Aaron and Andrew will have more time together next chapter. There will also be a bit of exploration into the Drew issue as well.

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#58 2018-10-18 00:32:48

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Aaron and Andrew will have more time together next chapter. There will also be a bit of exploration into the Drew issue as well.

Please don't think i'm insinuating anything gay between them. It was simply a thought about their friendship, brawn and brains working together. I look forward to the clarifications with Drew. Thank you.

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#59 2018-10-18 04:37:08

James Marcus
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Re: Just a Taste is all it Takes

Elessar wrote:

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Aaron and Andrew will have more time together next chapter. There will also be a bit of exploration into the Drew issue as well.

Please don't think i'm insinuating anything gay between them. It was simply a thought about their friendship, brawn and brains working together. I look forward to the clarifications with Drew. Thank you.

No Insinuation taken, M/M is something I will never have in my stories, though there may be a few men magically transformed into women.

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#60 2018-10-23 05:41:44

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Re: Just a Taste is all it Takes

James Marcus wrote:

No Insinuation taken, M/M is something I will never have in my stories, though there may be a few men magically transformed into women.

yes, but which male getting transformed would be the interesting part. would the "hero" become the "heroin", or will it be their best friend? the options are almost limitless for this twisted gender bender plot scheme.

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#61 2018-10-23 09:01:33

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Re: Just a Taste is all it Takes

Sdragon wrote:

James Marcus wrote:

No Insinuation taken, M/M is something I will never have in my stories, though there may be a few men magically transformed into women.

yes, but which male getting transformed would be the interesting part. would the "hero" become the "heroin", or will it be their best friend? the options are almost limitless for this twisted gender bender plot scheme.

Technically it doesn’t even have to be a male turned female. Could be visa versus.... female turned male? Something of an accident?

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#62 2018-10-23 18:22:58

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Re: Just a Taste is all it Takes

Elessar, the original comment was about the (im)possibility of male-male sex in the story.  Thus, turning a woman into a guy for the purposes of sex would not be something the author would be interested in.  I'm pretty sure he was suggesting the idea of sex occurring after the guy had been turned into a woman, thus ending up with male-female sex (even if still a bit mentally squicky...).

Eric Storm

PS: the phrase is "vice versa"  (Sorry, tried, but could not resist this correction...)


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#63 2018-10-24 06:27:33

James Marcus
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Re: Just a Taste is all it Takes

Eric Storm wrote:

Elessar, the original comment was about the (im)possibility of male-male sex in the story.  Thus, turning a woman into a guy for the purposes of sex would not be something the author would be interested in.  I'm pretty sure he was suggesting the idea of sex occurring after the guy had been turned into a woman, thus ending up with male-female sex (even if still a bit mentally squicky...).

Eric Storm

PS: the phrase is "vice versa"  (Sorry, tried, but could not resist this correction...)

Exactly, basically the guy and his lover are both transsexual, Male to female, but since the story takes place in the 80's when that was not as openly accepted, they are hiding as a gay couple. When they get affected by the Main Characters powers they are transformed into actual women. Everyone remembers that they were once male, but now they are female. and under the MC's control.

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