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#1 2016-01-29 16:07:01

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Six of one...

Six of one...

Michael finds that his best friends want to be more.

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#2 2016-02-05 10:18:47

SkiesEnd
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Re: Six of one...

Nice concept.

There are errors with words that a good proofread could fix as this spoils the flow, but other than that I enjoyed this immensely. 

Looking forward to more, thanks for sharing.

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#3 2016-10-05 06:25:23

eragon921
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Re: Six of one...

It's been a while since you got started. Do you plan on continuing past the second part?

I like the story so far. I agree with SkiesEnd that there are some bits a good proof would fix but I like the story quite a bit.

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#4 2018-01-04 15:15:01

Seumus1
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Re: Six of one...

Loving the story so far (Ch. 4). Really looking forward to seeing how Michael handles his relationships with both women going forward.

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