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#26 2011-02-17 13:44:04

Renownwolf
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Registered: 2010-11-07
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Re: Illicit Reunions

ah k shame it's done, loved every part of it

and the 3dtongue is just something I automaticly use, sometimes without me even realizing.

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#27 2011-02-17 19:08:12

Eric Storm
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Re: Illicit Reunions

Um... just a friendly tip:  You might want to get out of that habit.  It changes the tone of your message, for one thing, and for another, I'm sure it offends some people when you didn't mean to.  Especially when, like this, you've never posted here before.

Just a thought,
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#28 2011-02-17 20:19:32

Renownwolf
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Re: Illicit Reunions

I'll remember that, and I sure didn't mean to offend anyone

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#29 2011-08-07 15:10:44

Flamewolf
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From: Mississippi
Registered: 2011-07-17
Posts: 12

Re: Illicit Reunions

Great story I loved the twist I hated HOW Misty had to Die But I give your story a rating of 10/10

(posted from Chapter 8: Resolutions)

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#30 2011-08-07 18:28:04

Eric Storm
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Re: Illicit Reunions

As I told you in email, living here in Florida, the threats posed by hurricanes are all too well-known.  These things happen.

Glad you liked the story, though.  Thanks for the feedback,
Eric Storm


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#31 2011-12-09 21:19:27

grandad_rufus
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Re: Illicit Reunions

Just gotta love your stories Eric - Thanks.

(posted from Chapter 8: Resolutions)


If they give you ruled paper, write the other way.
Grandad Rufus.

It's not that I have a dirty mind, you understand. It's just that so many of my thoughts leave muddy little footprints...

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#32 2011-12-10 01:14:13

Eric Storm
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Re: Illicit Reunions

Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for the feedback.

Eric Storm


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#33 2012-12-19 03:31:59

robin42069
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Registered: 2012-11-24
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Re: Illicit Reunions

it was a good story i liked it.i also liked Henry as a character.you made him seem like a great person to know and thats always nice when reading a story makes it more real to me

(posted from Chapter 8: Resolutions)

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#34 2012-12-19 04:41:35

Eric Storm
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Re: Illicit Reunions

Glad you enjoyed it.  I don't get much feedback on this one, so it's always nice to hear that someone liked it.

Thanks for the feedback,
Eric Storm


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#35 2012-12-19 10:39:02

adultswim3
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Registered: 2012-09-15
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Re: Illicit Reunions

Another great story. I always start reading and say I'll read a chapter per night. Here I am at 5 am and I read the whole thing in one sitting. Your stories always manage to keep me wanting more. Luckily I don't have any plans for tomorrow eh today I guess. 3dsmile

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#36 2012-12-19 18:10:37

Eric Storm
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Re: Illicit Reunions

What?  Going to bed at 5am is normal, isn't it?

3dsmile

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#37 2012-12-20 06:44:25

lordalpha
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From: North Carolina
Registered: 2007-01-26
Posts: 139

Re: Illicit Reunions

It is for me, but I'm crazy!!

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#38 2015-10-23 07:43:30

DreamLvr_ca
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Registered: 2015-10-22
Posts: 4

Re: Illicit Reunions

Thank you well written and good build of character and story line.

(posted from Chapter 8: Resolutions)

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#39 2015-10-23 16:29:09

Eric Storm
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Re: Illicit Reunions

Glad you enjoyed the story.  I don't get much response to this one, so I'm always happy to hear someone liked it.

Thanks for the feedback,
Eric Storm


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#40 2015-10-30 19:37:23

Freon22
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Registered: 2011-08-17
Posts: 123

Re: Illicit Reunions

After reading DreamLvr_ca post I went and looked up the story. I read and really enjoyed it, when I post about a story I like to tell about what I liked about the story. I can not do that without giving away details and spoiling it for other that may not have read it yet. So I will just say well done Eric you really brought out the characters and storyline so well that I could see it unfold in my mind. Thank you! To everyone else if you have not read this story you should, it is only 8 chapters long but some of the best reading that I have read. :-)


“Nearly all men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a man's character, give him power.”

― Abraham Lincoln

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#41 2015-10-30 22:25:42

Eric Storm
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Re: Illicit Reunions

Thanks for the feedback.  You can always send emails if you want to praise things without giving away spoilers.
3dwink

I'm glad you liked the story.  Maybe others will discover it, too.

Eric Storm


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#42 2015-11-01 06:42:10

Rescue25
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Registered: 2014-07-06
Posts: 122

Re: Illicit Reunions

Really nice.  Liked the  ending.

(posted from Chapter 8: Resolutions)

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#43 2015-11-01 18:01:06

Eric Storm
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From: New Port Richey, FL
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Posts: 5751
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Re: Illicit Reunions

Glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for the feedback,
Eric Storm


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#44 2016-08-01 19:35:46

Lacy69
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From: Lamar, Colorado
Registered: 2016-06-20
Posts: 38

Re: Illicit Reunions

Just finished reading and what a great story.  Almost can be morphed in to a novel for super heroes.  I like how all the girls stepped up to help. Well written and enjoyed it

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#45 2016-08-01 20:32:09

Eric Storm
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From: New Port Richey, FL
Registered: 2006-09-12
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Re: Illicit Reunions

Glad you enjoyed it.

This story takes place in the "Project GUARDIAN" universe, as do Justice Seven and Paladin, which are more "superhero-like" if that's what you're interested in.

Thanks for the feedback,
Eric Storm


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#46 2017-12-02 15:59:59

ozygonzo
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Registered: 2012-03-18
Posts: 16

Re: Illicit Reunions

No Matter What You Write ERIC, I Find It Compelling Reading

Regards Paul

(posted from Chapter 8: Resolutions)


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#47 2017-12-29 00:26:28

db1644
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From: New Jersey
Registered: 2017-10-01
Posts: 8

Re: Illicit Reunions

I've recently discovered your site and just completed reading this story. I enjoyed it very much. It was well written with good character development. Please write some more. Thanks

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David S.

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#48 2017-12-29 19:04:06

Eric Storm
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From: New Port Richey, FL
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Posts: 5751
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Re: Illicit Reunions

Glad you enjoyed the story.  I hope you like my other works, as well.

Eric Storm


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#49 2022-06-18 22:13:05

daves.not.here
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From: South Florida
Registered: 2007-06-15
Posts: 36

Re: Illicit Reunions

Another great story!  I read this story about a decade ago, so I wanted to read it again.  I enjoyed reading it again.

I did notice 1 typo.  You put "wondered allowed" instead of "wondered out loud" in chapter 6.  :-)
Thanks,
Dave

(posted from Chapter 8: Resolutions)

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#50 2022-06-19 07:38:40

Eric Storm
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Re: Illicit Reunions

daves.not.here wrote:

...You put "wondered allowed" instead of "wondered out loud"...

Nooooo, I put "wondered allowed" instead of "wondered aloud".  My typos aren't THAT bad.

3dtongue

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