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Read the story and like it. The following is not a criticism, but offered as information:
The hymen is not located inside the vagina. It's at the entrance of the vagina. You can see find a description and see an illustration on Wikipedia here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hymen
The tip of the penis is called the glans, not the glands.
Just for the record, this is a typical mistake made by erotica writers, including me in my early days, because, having never deflowered a girl, we don't know any better.
As to the glans/glands thing... well, stop using damned medical terms in your erotica, and that won't happen.