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#1 2016-09-03 06:24:16

Bridget
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My Neighbors Incest

My Neighbors Incest

A story about a boy who discovers his neighbor's incestuous behavior. He uses his discovery to try and blackmail the hot teenager next door. He gets a whole lot more than he expected.


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#2 2016-09-06 06:16:55

Glockman22
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Re: My Neighbors Incest

Damn good story can't wait for more!

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#3 2016-09-06 17:01:16

bistander
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Registered: 2015-09-03
Posts: 239

Re: My Neighbors Incest

Thank you for taking the time to say so. You can read the crappy version of the rest if you don't want to wait for the updated version. I have to tell you, I'm up to my eyeballs in stuff right now, so I'm not making any promises on the timing. Chapter 11 of potential is the priority right now.

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#4 2016-09-06 19:26:21

Rescue25
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Re: My Neighbors Incest

Very hot.  Waiting on the next chapter.SOON please.
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(posted from Chapter 2: Brains, Balls or Just Plain Evil?)

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#5 2016-09-06 20:08:58

Eric Storm
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Registered: 2006-09-12
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Re: My Neighbors Incest

Careful there, Rescue...

Eric Storm


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#6 2016-09-08 00:47:25

thehilz
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Re: My Neighbors Incest

I couldn't wait and went to the other site to finish it. Been years since I had been there. I enjoyed the story  immensely. I was wondering what it was Susan had done at school that cause her to get grounded?

Last edited by thehilz (2016-09-08 00:48:36)

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#7 2016-09-08 02:30:27

Wicked Storm
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From: New Orleans
Registered: 2012-06-15
Posts: 367

Re: My Neighbors Incest

Your first chapter is excellent, and was written with a good pacing. I am looking foreward to the second.

(posted from Chapter 1: The Attic)


In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly.

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#8 2016-09-11 12:55:11

devonglen
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Registered: 2016-07-16
Posts: 5

Re: My Neighbors Incest

I read this story on another site. This one is much better!

(posted from Chapter 2: Brains, Balls or Just Plain Evil?)

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#9 2016-09-12 00:53:37

bistander
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Registered: 2015-09-03
Posts: 239

Re: My Neighbors Incest

Thank you. I've worked hard to develop my skill over the years that I was away. I'm still working hard.
I'll be updating, but not rewriting, the rest of this story for wolfpub.

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#10 2016-09-17 14:12:22

Wicked Storm
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Re: My Neighbors Incest

That is awesome bistander, it really shows. I am looking foreward to your updates. ^_^


In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly.

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#11 2017-01-24 13:28:18

saurav_mystery1989
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From: BANGALORE, INDIA
Registered: 2013-08-28
Posts: 14

Re: My Neighbors Incest

Good start and awesome till now but still need some more dose of it before I could comment. Would happy to see few more characters in the story.

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#12 2017-01-28 03:16:40

bistander
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Re: My Neighbors Incest

saurav_mystery1989 wrote:

Good start and awesome till now but still need some more dose of it before I could comment. Would happy to see few more characters in the story.

Oh, yeah, I forgot, I still need to update the other 15 chapters and load them here. If you care to read the 2009 version, when I knew less about writing, you can go to sexstories under bistander and read it there. I'll try and get some more of them converted and loaded as soon as I finish chapter 16 of Potential.

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#13 2017-03-06 23:09:02

Intruder
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Registered: 2017-03-03
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Re: My Neighbors Incest

I have read your story on xnxx.com and saw you were on here and followed you here.  Love this story.    Cant wait to read more 
Thank you

(posted from Chapter 2: Brains, Balls or Just Plain Evil?)

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#14 2017-08-07 05:11:26

HendrixMorton
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Re: My Neighbors Incest

Intruder wrote:

I have read your story on xnxx.com and saw you were on here and followed you here.  Love this story.    Cant wait to read more 
Thank you

(posted from Chapter 2: Brains, Balls or Just Plain Evil?)

Seems that the other site has removed all but one chapter of this story (My Neighbor's Incest Part VI (revised))....Never got to finish it...Is there another site that might be hosting it?

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#15 2017-08-09 02:39:28

bistander
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Re: My Neighbors Incest

Can you believe that, after eight years, they removed that story and I assume that is also why I found myself banned from the site last week. It would have been nice if they at least told me why.

HendrixMorton, you have two options. One, wait for me to finish moving it to this site, rewritten as the first three chapters were. The other, you could email me and I will send you the copies of the chapters as they were on XN. Would have to be openoffice files or text files, though.

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#16 2017-08-09 05:19:37

HendrixMorton
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Re: My Neighbors Incest

bistander wrote:

Can you believe that, after eight years, they removed that story and I assume that is also why I found myself banned from the site last week. It would have been nice if they at least told me why.

HendrixMorton, you have two options. One, wait for me to finish moving it to this site, rewritten as the first three chapters were. The other, you could email me and I will send you the copies of the chapters as they were on XN. Would have to be openoffice files or text files, though.

Email sent...And Thanks!

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#17 2017-08-25 01:20:33

Fenixreign
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Re: My Neighbors Incest

XNXX.com regularly does purges now if anyone HINTS at under 18 sex.  One of the main reasons Magusfang moved off there.

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#18 2017-08-26 19:52:44

bistander
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Posts: 239

Re: My Neighbors Incest

Fenixreign wrote:

XNXX.com regularly does purges now if anyone HINTS at under 18 sex.  One of the main reasons Magusfang moved off there.

Yup, I'm sure that someone did more than a hint. Afterall, the stories had been there for 8 years.

Had I known about The Pub, I wouldn't have gotten back involved with that site. Unfortunately, now I have to finish this story over there.

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#19 2017-08-26 21:21:56

Eric Storm
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From: New Port Richey, FL
Registered: 2006-09-12
Posts: 5745
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Re: My Neighbors Incest

Um... why?  Just redirect your readers here.  Rewriting a story to meet a site's restrictions doesn't strike me as a good idea unless they're going to pay you for it.

Eric Storm


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#20 2017-08-28 07:03:13

Sniper
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Registered: 2016-07-04
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Re: My Neighbors Incest

I am with Eric on this topic. If that site puts such constrictions on its authors it is time to leave. Point you readers to the Pub and post your story here. If there is no money involved just go with the best site there is.

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#21 2017-08-29 12:56:00

Fenixreign
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Posts: 255

Re: My Neighbors Incest

I also concur with Eric.  As long as you continue to post here, your reader base will be able to find you.

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#22 2017-09-01 18:46:43

bistander
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Re: My Neighbors Incest

Eric Storm wrote:

Um... why?  Just redirect your readers here.  Rewriting a story to meet a site's restrictions doesn't strike me as a good idea unless they're going to pay you for it.

Eric Storm

Yup, I agree also, and if you look through the comments on my stories over there, that's what I have been doing. I tell them everything comes here first and it is uncensored. I'd tell them in the story but that will get me banned, too.

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#23 2017-09-21 07:18:40

Forgotten_Angel
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Registered: 2017-09-20
Posts: 1

Re: My Neighbors Incest

Hoping you have had time to edit the remaining chapters of this story so that you can post them soon. Great start!

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#24 2018-03-11 20:51:17

mwahoo
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Re: My Neighbors Incest

Admin wrote:

My Neighbors Inceat

A story about a boy who discovers his neighbor's incestuous behavior. He uses his discovery to try and blackmail the hot teenager next door. He gets a whole lot more than he expected.

did this actually sell as a book under another author?  Saw it on Wattpad for a while offered as a book

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#25 2018-03-12 12:55:48

bistander
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Re: My Neighbors Incest

mwahoo wrote:

Admin wrote:

My Neighbors Inceat

A story about a boy who discovers his neighbor's incestuous behavior. He uses his discovery to try and blackmail the hot teenager next door. He gets a whole lot more than he expected.

did this actually sell as a book under another author?  Saw it on Wattpad for a while offered as a book

If it did, I want my fuckin' money! I'd like a link to where you saw it. I saw it on another for-profit site posted by someone as if they wrote it. I joined the site just to tell them they didn't, but they never responded.
I wrote this in 2009 on sexstories. They recently pulled it down because their rules changed.

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