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#1 2015-10-12 23:07:02

Bridget
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Boy In The Grass

Boy In The Grass

The series follows the merger of two families, three teens and two single women; and the trouble they get into as well as how the family grows and deminishes over the years. Chapter one deals with how the main character's meet.


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#2 2016-01-18 12:16:33

Shaggy18
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Registered: 2015-01-14
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Re: Boy In The Grass

Loved this story. The whole concept was fantastic. Some of the scenes you wrote out were so funny that I laughed so hard I cried. I really enjoyed reading this.

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#3 2016-05-30 04:43:42

Bushhairs
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Registered: 2014-11-25
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Re: Boy In The Grass

Has anyone any information regarding Magusfang's rather lengthy absence? I have been reading his stories since the beginning and have been addicted to them ever since.

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#4 2016-06-25 14:33:35

Lacy69
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From: Lamar, Colorado
Registered: 2016-06-20
Posts: 38

Re: Boy In The Grass

I also have read his stories and i got into so much i could not put it down, just to find what happens next.  All three were good and then....(cry) no more and so, so many unanswered questions.

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#5 2016-08-12 02:58:18

Hells Gate
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Registered: 2016-06-29
Posts: 1

Re: Boy In The Grass

Where are these books i need them for... Research... Yes research.

(posted from Amy Gets an Early Birthday Present.)

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#6 2016-08-21 03:24:27

Magusfang
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Registered: 2014-06-01
Posts: 272

Re: Boy In The Grass

Magus fang is in the hospital again. Sorry folks but my past he come back to haunt me. I am undergoing some rather arduous treatment for small bowel cancer but I am trying to write when I feel up to it

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#7 2016-08-21 03:35:40

Eric Storm
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From: New Port Richey, FL
Registered: 2006-09-12
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Re: Boy In The Grass

We wish you the best, Magusfang.  I'd keep you in my prayers, if I wasn't an Agnostic.  Please try to keep us posted on how you're doing.

May it all turn out better than you could hope for.

Eric Storm


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#8 2016-08-21 12:42:16

Magusfang
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Re: Boy In The Grass

Will do, actually not feeling well to bad, just kind of weak but I did just have surgery a few days ago and now I'm not twenty any more, don't quite bounce back like I used to lol
But the docs seem pretty pleased with themselves and that's usually a good sign.

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#9 2016-08-21 18:16:49

Eric Storm
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Glad to hear it.  Keep up the recovery.

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#10 2018-09-23 22:51:46

DaveGrous
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Registered: 2018-06-18
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Re: Boy In The Grass

Fantastic story!!! You should publish it! It is that dam good! I would buy a copy.

(posted from Chapter 63: Is Max Bringing Guests For Dinner or Has His Goose Been Cooked?)

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#11 2018-11-27 07:07:46

Maverick7508
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Registered: 2012-02-04
Posts: 63

Re: Boy In The Grass

Overall the story is pretty good. Admittedly there are some points where there were unnecessary breaks in immersion, like with June putting so much into ruining Mike to win the divorce. 85% of custody cases in family court are won by women, and the remaining 15% are 50/50 between men winning custody outright, or uncontested. Just the affairs would have sunk him, or the trade issues, heck even what he said to the judge would have done it. But i digress, all in all a good story with a fairly constant tempo. Glad to hear you are getting better btw.

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#12 2023-04-05 18:46:08

Dadrepus
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Registered: 2023-01-11
Posts: 91

Re: Boy In The Grass

Wow, just finished "Boy in the Grass". This is probably one of the best erotic fictions I have ever read. The emotional impact of the story had me in tears many times. The authors interplay of characters was brilliantly conceived and yes, there was plenty of sex but not the same old same old one finds in many other stories. Just outstanding in concept and execution. One has to live with the wonky editor used to type the story as a ? showed up instead of quote marks. But it is well worth putting up with it to complete the story. And it is a long story! The kind I love! I want to be immersed into the world the author created. One of the Best on this site that I have read so far.

(posted from Chapter 63: Is Max Bringing Guests For Dinner or Has His Goose Been Cooked?)


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#13 2023-04-05 22:36:57

Eric Storm
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Registered: 2006-09-12
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Re: Boy In The Grass

I have spent years looking for a solution to the "question mark diamond" problem, with no success.  The site uses UTF-8 encoding, which should include all those characters.

I can only hope that this problem does not persist into the next version of the site... if the next version of the site ever gets finished...

Eric Storm


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