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#1 2011-12-04 11:54:16

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Bait and Switch

Bait and Switch

Our hero awakes from odd dreams, to discover he has a new ability.

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#2 2011-12-05 09:51:09

gaianwizard
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Re: Bait and Switch

Loved it!!!  The storyline is extremely enjoyable, with enough erotica to make it interesting.  Plus recognizing all the "geek" references (i.e. the Dalek alarm and the Jon Snow reference) was a major bonus!  It's not often that an erotica informs you about a TV adaptation to a favorite series of books.  I just spent the last 2 hours reading it non-stop.  I hope the rest isn't long in coming.  Keep up the good work!

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#3 2011-12-06 02:52:20

Comora
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Re: Bait and Switch

Damn. That was heavy.

(posted from Chapter 11)

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#4 2011-12-09 01:27:12

Lucky869
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Re: Bait and Switch

good read so far, really enjoying it.   looking forward to more : )

(posted from Chapter 3)

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#5 2011-12-14 06:17:06

WarLord
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Re: Bait and Switch

Greetings

I'm enjoying this story very much.  Fun ride with many interesting characters and situations to keep my interest. 

Thanx for sharing your vision

(posted from Chapter 13)


"A scrupulous writer, in every sentence that he writes, will ask himself at least four questions, thus: 1. What am I trying to say? 2. What words will express it? 3. What image or idiom will make it clearer? 4. Is this image fresh enough to have an effect?" - George Orwell, Politics and the English Language, 1946

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#6 2011-12-17 08:51:18

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Re: Bait and Switch

You have now made me sit on the edge of my seat for another series while waiting for the updates to be posted.  Congratulations, I am hoping everything goes great so that you keep writing; I know, how selfish of me; and I look forward to any other work you write.

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#7 2011-12-27 10:45:32

Lucky869
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Re: Bait and Switch

man, i'm lovin this story more and more, great writing.

(posted from Chapter 12)

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#8 2012-01-05 19:47:57

SuperArc
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Re: Bait and Switch

First of all it's the Wheel of Time series, not the Dragon Reborn series. 3dsmile
And secondly, the quote is: "Death is lighter than a feather, duty heavier than a mountain."

Your "duty is lighter than a feather, and yet heavier than a mountain." wouldnt make much sense. 3dsmile

(posted from Chapter 20)

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#9 2012-01-09 02:03:19

hoevenator
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Re: Bait and Switch

I really liked the story, it kept me wanting more.

(posted from Final)

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#10 2012-01-10 19:09:27

Colorado
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Re: Bait and Switch

I hope it isn't your last work ever...
You have a skill and you should never let your skill fade.

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#11 2012-01-15 07:54:44

sc8or8pi8on
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Re: Bait and Switch

Ive read your threads from XNXX.... i think my name is the same there too, but just keep what i said in mind and i look forward to when you return to this form of writing.

GOOD LUCK OUT THERE


Just moving through life as best as i can.

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#12 2012-01-18 06:11:26

Lucky869
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Re: Bait and Switch

i enjoyed this book immensely and look forward to any more books you choose to grace us with : )

(posted from Final)

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#13 2012-03-15 22:11:51

grandad_rufus
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Re: Bait and Switch

Nice story, nicely balanced plot. Well done!

(posted from the Item Information Page)


If they give you ruled paper, write the other way.
Grandad Rufus.

It's not that I have a dirty mind, you understand. It's just that so many of my thoughts leave muddy little footprints...

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#14 2012-05-13 20:23:53

Kitsune
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Re: Bait and Switch

Great story. I actually read all your stories over on xnxx and all of them where amazing. This was a great idea for a story loved every second of it.

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#15 2016-08-01 02:22:51

Lacy69
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Re: Bait and Switch

Nicely written story with a well balanced plot. Would like to see more from you

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#16 2016-08-01 07:14:06

Fenixreign
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Re: Bait and Switch

Hopefully Eric will be able to get around to posting it for him soon.  Unfortunately, we lost DB a while back.  His stories are around if you look for them, but they just haven't been uploaded here yet.

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