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#1 2015-10-12 23:07:02
Girls In The Grass
Girls In The Grass
Sequel to Boy In The Grass, continuing adventures of Max and Friends. The story branches out from the core of the family and there are some new twists, some I didn't even see coming until I finished reading what I wrote!
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#2 2016-07-22 01:25:33
- Lacy69
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- From: Lamar, Colorado
- Registered: 2016-06-20
- Posts: 38
Re: Girls In The Grass
I enjoyed this sequel. The interaction between every was great and you proven that Max is not indestructible and that even he has a line that does not get crossed. Very well written.
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#3 2016-07-23 16:58:32
- Magusfang
- Completely Blotto
- Registered: 2014-06-01
- Posts: 272
Re: Girls In The Grass
Yeah, I kind of picked on him 
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#4 2016-08-24 10:48:10
- Magusfang
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- Registered: 2014-06-01
- Posts: 272
Re: Girls In The Grass
Oh someone asked about Bones, sorry for the delayed response. Amy just sort of grows out of him but he is mentioned a gas times. Amy playing with him in the library and being chased by Mia
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#5 2017-03-28 16:57:04
- Neitherspace
- Completely Blotto
- From: Silver City
- Registered: 2006-12-03
- Posts: 575
Re: Girls In The Grass
Man what ever the abbot did must have been BAD for a roman catholic to comit suicide means they fear the fires of hell less than the church
(posted from Chapter 15: Answers)
"I figure that if you can't write decent dialogue for the devil, maybe you shouldn't be a writer."-Richard Kadrey
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#6 2023-04-12 19:27:10
- Dadrepus
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- Registered: 2023-01-11
- Posts: 99
Re: Girls In The Grass
As good as the first book. So well written and conceived. If you want a more complete review check "Boy In The Grass". The only thing that would have made it better would have been fixing the spelling, grammar and punctuation.
(posted from Chapter 63: Unexpected)
Always willing to help. May not be good at it ;-)
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