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#1 2016-04-13 22:00:02

Bridget
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Boy and his Genie, A

A Boy and his Genie

A mysterious package leads Matt Evans to magical fun, as well as a centuries-old conspiracy.


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#2 2016-04-15 19:44:20

saurav_mystery1989
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From: BANGALORE, INDIA
Registered: 2013-08-28
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Re: Boy and his Genie, A

Awesome plot. But it seems both Chapter 14 and 15 are same, did I miss something ?

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#3 2016-04-16 00:08:17

witmoca
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Registered: 2014-12-05
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Re: Boy and his Genie, A

Chapter 14 is missing, i believe. I seem to remember that 14 should be what i think is a great ending, with chapter 15 serving as a sort of extra 3dwink. But you're missing a few things if you read chapter 15 without 14. Probably uploaded the wrong chapter 3dtongue.

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#4 2016-04-16 20:48:30

drmetz13
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Registered: 2016-04-14
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Re: Boy and his Genie, A

i liked this story very much, and enjoyed reading it. the last chapter was a little detracting with all the time travel though.

(posted from Chapter 15 - End)

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#5 2016-04-17 22:23:20

DragoTime
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From: UK
Registered: 2016-04-13
Posts: 4

Re: Boy and his Genie, A

Fixed the story. Instead of Chapter 15 twice, Chapter 14 and 15 are there properly. Anyone who was confused, it's fixed now.

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#6 2016-07-22 01:48:35

Lacy69
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From: Lamar, Colorado
Registered: 2016-06-20
Posts: 38

Re: Boy and his Genie, A

Nice story line.  Well written and very inventive on the Genie and the society that wanted to take them all.

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#7 2023-07-09 06:24:52

Dadrepus
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Registered: 2023-01-11
Posts: 91

Re: Boy and his Genie, A

Definitely a Fun Story with a good ending.Ready to read the related stories.

(posted from Chapter 15 - End)


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