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#1 2006-11-29 01:54:52
No Time in the Present
Gary Milner suddenly discovers he has the ability to stop time in its tracks. What will he do with such power? His eyes turn to his mother.
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#2 2007-07-16 19:25:14
- ivbeenviolated
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Re: No Time in the Present
briliant........ you could make a series out of that
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#3 2007-07-17 01:21:47
- Eric Storm
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Re: No Time in the Present
I've thought about it, but I have too many other projects running at the moment.
Glad you enjoyed it.
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#4 2008-08-06 00:02:24
- blacksmith14
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Re: No Time in the Present
great story ,needs more chapters, maybe another young girl?
keeo it comming
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#5 2008-08-06 01:33:05
- Eric Storm
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Re: No Time in the Present
Glad you enjoyed it. If there were ever to be a continuation of this story, it would be titled "No Time in the Past", and then "No Time in the Future". I know what the former would be, but no clue about the latter.
Thanks for the feedback,
Eric
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#6 2009-07-03 15:41:11
- mjsinjapan
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Oh yes, this one could span many chapters, good job m'boy 
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#7 2010-10-06 16:00:40
- reading_hypnotist
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Re: No Time in the Present
I do think it would be interesting to learn what Gary's mom's reaction would be if she ever found out about his power and what he'd been up to.
I'm not really interested in seeing him time traveling, or building a harem, or discovering a secret group of people with similar powers (been there, done most of that with CAMP 
) but it would be fun to see how his relationship with his mother evolves if she learned his secret.
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#8 2010-11-01 17:37:12
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Re: No Time in the Present
Any chance of that ever happening?
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#9 2010-11-01 18:43:50
- Eric Storm
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Re: No Time in the Present
Any chance of her ever learning about his ability? Maybe, but the continuation of this story, if it's ever written, would be called "No Time in the Past", and it would be about him going... well, into the past, to... Well, I don't really want to say more than that.
But I have no idea if that story will ever be written. I have so many other things going on right now, I'm not sure when I'd have the time.
Eric Storm
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#10 2015-11-22 21:49:02
- Rescue25
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Re: No Time in the Present
It is pity that us readers have more time than the writers. But then we can read in a few minuets what the writers have to labor many hours on.
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#11 2016-06-23 14:37:14
- afitzroy
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Incredible writing and very erotic story.
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#12 2016-06-23 17:53:11
- Eric Storm
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Re: No Time in the Present
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for giving feedback on a story that doesn't "get much love" from the readers.
Regards,
Eric Storm
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