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#1 2006-11-29 03:32:52

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Death of Innocence

Their parents were killed because of what they are. They intend to show their parents' killers the cost of that mistake.

Please read and comment.

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#2 2016-02-03 00:02:24

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Re: Death of Innocence

Good start.  Where/when is chapt.2?

(posted from Chapter 1)

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#3 2016-06-10 00:03:51

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Re: Death of Innocence

Rescue25 wrote:

Good start.  Where/when is chapt.2?

(posted from Chapter 1)

Good point.

The story as posted strongly implies more depth to the story AND a lot of story left unsaid.
If the story was going to be abandoned then the epilogue could have been left out.

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