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#1 2015-10-12 23:07:02
Time Compass, The
Time Compass, The
Jack owns a straight device which can stop time. This leads to encounters with strange creatures and a lot of sex.
This is the first real novel I've ever written. Up till now my 'novels' are more a series of interlinked stories. I hope you like it, and constructive criticism would be helpful, thanks
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#2 2016-05-30 15:53:56
- barenakeddreams
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Re: Time Compass, The
Enjoying this, but a quick question. At the start when he left time stop the man he made dance forgot everything. Wouldn't Emma forget everything and be freaking out over how she is in this guy's house? And not yet know what happened to her parents?
(posted from Chapter 1)
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#3 2017-10-26 15:06:16
- Todger65
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Re: Time Compass, The
Interesting twist to the usual time stop stories, and open for a continuation.
(posted from Chapter 1)
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#4 2017-10-27 14:44:21
- Todger65
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Re: Time Compass, The
A good story, interesting twists. It's is even open for a follow up if ever you wanted.
(posted from Chapter 11)
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