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#1 2006-12-03 23:03:19

Bridget
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Simple Errand, A

A simple errand proves to be not so simple.  A Ryan Caern storry.

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#2 2010-01-14 06:41:52

Megabyte1949
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Re: Simple Errand, A

Really cool story. I like how you gave him what started out as a boring day that turned into a rather difficult one. Good thing he was able to overcome that goblin in time to make his date.

(posted from Chapter 1)


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