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#1 2006-12-03 10:05:13
Picture's Worth, A
Some say that a picture steals your soul. Sally Turner discovers this is not entirely incorrect. A picture actually copies a person at that moment of time.
She learns how to interact with the people contained in the picture to help her father rescue a kidnapping victim.
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#2 2006-12-30 17:29:51
- dv8n
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Re: Picture's Worth, A
I liked it....kinda weird the way the "potential" story included others who sally never met...wonder if they are real....like maybe they just happened to be in that place at that time and she somehow tapped that....or maybe her mind built mental constructs (like the bat) to explore this "other" world....
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#3 2006-12-30 22:41:45
- Storymaster69
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Re: Picture's Worth, A
I actually think of it more as a snapshot of the entire world of the moment the picture was taken. I suppose if she was to continue in the "interactive" world that she can control long enough i.e. 9+ months there could potentially be people born that don't exist in the "real" world or she could simply create someone but that goes beyond the scope of the story.
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#5 2007-01-11 05:10:45
- Storymaster69
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Re: Picture's Worth, A
Thanks Luna. I hope you can find something else by me in the future that will capture your interest also.
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#6 2009-01-22 19:08:43
- RED_FOX87
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Re: Picture's Worth, A
Well don't know about the others, but this one certainly captures your interest. It's to early to judge completely yet, but it has the potential to be a great story, so I hope you will provide us with more soon.
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#7 2009-01-23 02:46:48
- Storymaster69
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Re: Picture's Worth, A
Umm are you sure you are talking about the right story? This one is finished. Anyway I'm glad you enjoyed my writing.
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#8 2009-01-24 22:29:03
- RED_FOX87
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Re: Picture's Worth, A
This was it, but I guess I must have missed the last chapter. Just re-read the story and the last chapter, and it is still as good as it was the first time. It's a shame this story ended, because it has such great potential. Sally has a unique ability that would fit in well with a serious story or an erotica, so I hope you make a sequel or a similar story soon.
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#9 2011-01-24 22:25:57
- LAoW
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Re: Picture's Worth, A
So I finally read another story (I'm just going down the list). I have to say, I kinda' liked the story line. I agree with the masses, it has a lot of potential to be even more awesome, should you continue it. The only thing I was uncertain of is Sally taking advantage of the kidnapped girl. Kinda' seems like bad timing. Ah well.
I don't have to worry about revenge because Karma is a bigger bitch than I will ever have to be.
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#10 2011-01-25 02:47:15
- Storymaster69
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Re: Picture's Worth, A
LAoW wrote:
The only thing I was uncertain of is Sally taking advantage of the kidnapped girl.
Call it my inner perv speaking out but in Sally's defence she is only "taking advantage" of her in a virtual world that has no impact on the real world. The "victim" doesn't know what she and Sally did.
Little look into what would happen if I ever do a sequel: They become secret lovers (they are also partners in the RCMP) and she understands what Sally can do and is fine with it.
Sex isn't the answer.
Sex is the question.
Yes is the answer.
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#11 2011-01-25 02:59:05
- LAoW
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Re: Picture's Worth, A
Storymaster69 wrote:
Call it my inner perv speaking out but in Sally's defence she is only "taking advantage" of her in a virtual world that has no impact on the real world. The "victim" doesn't know what she and Sally did.
Little look into what would happen if I ever do a sequel: They become secret lovers (they are also partners in the RCMP) and she understands what Sally can do and is fine with it.
Inner perv? You? Never! 
And the sequel sounds like something you've already written up. 
I don't have to worry about revenge because Karma is a bigger bitch than I will ever have to be.
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#12 2011-01-25 03:01:56
- Storymaster69
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Re: Picture's Worth, A
I've written an opening scene but I can't think of a case that she can use her abilities on.
Sex isn't the answer.
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