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#1 2010-10-16 04:18:33

Bridget
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Fateless, The

Fateless, The

Adam had an unlucky life, every thing that could go wrong did. One day the fates decided to correct that oversight.


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#2 2010-10-16 06:24:27

edvardlavea
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From: Whistler. B.C. Canada
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Re: Fateless, The

Awesome start. Thank you so much for this story. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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The only limit to our realization of tomorrow will be our doubts of today - Franklin D. Roosevelt

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#3 2010-10-16 06:40:25

edvardlavea
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Re: Fateless, The

Where can I vote for you?


The only limit to our realization of tomorrow will be our doubts of today - Franklin D. Roosevelt

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#4 2010-10-16 08:27:46

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Re: Fateless, The

To "vote" for a Prospective Author, use the recommendation system.  It can be found on the left-hand side of any story page.  Look for the sentence "Would you recommend this item?"

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PS:  You should do this with every story you read.  It will help the system recommend new stories to you.


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#5 2010-10-16 12:58:06

James Marcus
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Re: Fateless, The

Thank you for your feedback, I am actually quite proud of this story. It came to me in dreams little by little each night as I wrote it.

Last edited by telgar (2010-10-16 13:24:33)

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#6 2010-10-16 14:55:42

nightsecho
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Re: Fateless, The

good start i like it

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looking at you with wide eyes from the darkness

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#7 2010-10-17 02:52:48

Lucky869
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Re: Fateless, The

oooh, very good, will there be more?

(posted from Fate)

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#8 2010-10-17 04:05:16

James Marcus
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Posts: 120

Re: Fateless, The

Thank you for your comments Nightsecho and Lucky869. Yes there will be more, I am working on chapter two right now, I just finished Chapter three of My other story and have now started on chapter two of this one

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#9 2010-10-17 20:37:29

Lucky869
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Re: Fateless, The

sweetness! *rubs nipples in anticipation*

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#10 2010-10-19 06:12:31

Storymaster69
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From: Alberta, Canada
Registered: 2006-11-07
Posts: 329

Re: Fateless, The

Cool start to the story and an interesting twist at the end.  I look forward to finding out what happens next

(posted from Fate)


Sex isn't the answer.
Sex is the question.
Yes is the answer.

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#11 2010-10-20 02:11:10

James Marcus
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Re: Fateless, The

Storymaster69 wrote:

Cool start to the story and an interesting twist at the end.  I look forward to finding out what happens next

(posted from Fate)

Chapter two is compleated and just waiting for the editor to go over it.

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#12 2010-10-21 00:14:26

Bd.Carlo
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Re: Fateless, The

Very nice, another very good beginning to a story, I am looking forward to more.

(posted from Fate)


"Genius may have its limitations, but stupidity is not thus handicapped."  Elbert Hubbard
"A bookstore is one of the only pieces of evidence we have that people are still thinking." Jerry Seinfeld

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#13 2010-10-24 15:22:05

nightsecho
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Re: Fateless, The

awesome new chapter

(posted from Chapter 2: New Life)


looking at you with wide eyes from the darkness

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#14 2010-10-24 22:44:46

Storymaster69
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From: Alberta, Canada
Registered: 2006-11-07
Posts: 329

Re: Fateless, The

I read the new chapter and enjoyed it greatly.  I look forward to seeing what happens next.


Sex isn't the answer.
Sex is the question.
Yes is the answer.

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#15 2010-10-25 04:28:51

Lucky869
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Re: Fateless, The

gah, can't wait for more, just keeps getting better and better 3dbig_smile

(posted from Chapter 2: New Life)

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#16 2010-10-25 15:30:59

James Marcus
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Registered: 2010-06-14
Posts: 120

Re: Fateless, The

Thank you, I am glad you are enjoying reading it as much as I am enjoying writeing it.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#17 2010-11-06 10:09:41

advancewar
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From: New hampshire
Registered: 2007-02-05
Posts: 204

Re: Fateless, The

i like this alot so far cant wait for more 3dbig_smile

(posted from Chapter 2: New Life)


life=books

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#18 2010-11-06 10:10:59

advancewar
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From: New hampshire
Registered: 2007-02-05
Posts: 204

Re: Fateless, The

Lucky869 wrote:

sweetness! *rubs nipples in anticipation*

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creepy  lol


life=books

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#19 2010-11-11 17:50:28

Lucky869
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Registered: 2006-12-18
Posts: 30

Re: Fateless, The

god this story just keeps getting more and more interesting, really love reading your stories and as always, eagerly awaiting more submissions 3dsmile

(posted from Chapter 3: Lust)

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#20 2010-11-13 05:30:11

James Marcus
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Registered: 2010-06-14
Posts: 120

Re: Fateless, The

Thank You I strive to keep you all intertained with plot twists and hard core sex 3dsmile

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#21 2011-01-26 14:04:29

StoryJunkie
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Registered: 2010-12-31
Posts: 191

Re: Fateless, The

great story, I can't wait to see what happens next

(posted from Chapter 3: Lust)

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#22 2011-02-06 02:37:19

Cenobite829
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Re: Fateless, The

Great chapter. I love the fact that Adam isn't just automatically being a jerk or overwhelmed by the power he has been given. I would like in the future to see a Fateless who does let the power go to his head. I can't wait for more man.

(posted from Chapter 4: Discovery)


Jigsaw: If you're good at anticipating the human mind. It leaves nothing to chance

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#23 2011-02-06 04:48:34

James Marcus
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Registered: 2010-06-14
Posts: 120

Re: Fateless, The

Thank you for your coments and I am glad you are enjoying it. The fates go through a long process to ensure that the powers of a fateless are given to people who will not go crazy with the power. But you never know it may happen.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#24 2011-02-08 17:28:22

Bd.Carlo
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Registered: 2009-11-06
Posts: 62

Re: Fateless, The

Another good chapter, I am still looking forward to each new chapter as they come out.

(posted from Chapter 4: Discovery)


"Genius may have its limitations, but stupidity is not thus handicapped."  Elbert Hubbard
"A bookstore is one of the only pieces of evidence we have that people are still thinking." Jerry Seinfeld

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#25 2011-06-11 03:13:26

Lucky869
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Registered: 2006-12-18
Posts: 30

Re: Fateless, The

great chapter, definitely eager for more 3dsmile

(posted from Chapter 5: Choices)

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