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#1 2006-11-29 01:59:16

Bridget
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From: The Internet
Registered: 2006-09-09
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Spirit is Willing, The

You really should be careful what you wish for...

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#2 2007-12-20 12:50:52

JayVee
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From: Belgium
Registered: 2007-12-19
Posts: 11
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Re: Spirit is Willing, The

Very nice story. I liked the humour in it... Personification of body parts always seem to get me laughing.

(posted from Chapter 1)


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#3 2008-04-03 18:50:28

McHaMER
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Re: Spirit is Willing, The

wow great pace...exciting with a lot more humor....kudos

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#4 2018-06-24 10:43:09

jingo144
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Registered: 2012-03-25
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Re: Spirit is Willing, The

Brilliant story, I really enjoyed it, as I do most of your work.

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#5 2018-06-24 17:35:14

Eric Storm
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From: New Port Richey, FL
Registered: 2006-09-12
Posts: 5745
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Re: Spirit is Willing, The

Glad you enjoyed the story.

Eric Storm


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