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#1 2009-09-11 00:54:23
Where Once We Were
Where Once We Were
Unexpected disaster strikes across the globe. An evil force long dormant returns. A handful of people become aware, but can they learn the secret of their past in time to act? If they can, which side will they take?
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#2 2009-09-11 15:41:33
- Loki
- Tipsy
- Registered: 2006-12-10
- Posts: 9
Re: Where Once We Were
I like the idea behind it so far.There isn't much but I can see some glimmers of the story in there and I'm intrigued. I did have some trouble at first following the different story threads but thats more of my problem than yours. Overall its a good start, and I look forward to reading more. And thank you.
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#3 2009-09-14 02:27:57
- Black Rose
- Evil Bar Wench
- From: The Edge of Nowhere
- Registered: 2006-11-26
- Posts: 164
Re: Where Once We Were
I think this is really good so far. It has all the earmarks of a great epic and I'm eagerly looking forward to more. Great job!
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