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#1 2009-01-19 20:40:36
To Just Disappear
To Just Disappear
To disappear sometimes sounds so damn good.
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#2 2009-01-22 19:10:55
- Timotheos
- Inebriated
- Registered: 2008-12-22
- Posts: 15
Re: To Just Disappear
Nice ^_^. Unfortunately, I know not, what else to say.
(posted from Chapter 1)
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#3 2009-02-14 12:09:58
- DarkStage
- Inebriated
- Registered: 2009-02-09
- Posts: 17
Re: To Just Disappear
nicely done. A well portrayed view of a relationship turned one-sided by "Rosanne Barr" {sorry, only example I could conjure up 
) Your unique twist by a view from the 'other side' intrigued me. I have seen similar poems written from the demander whining about lack of attention, but never from the ..victim?
Thank you
(posted from Chapter 1)
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