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#1 2008-10-04 06:59:27
Mother's Embrace
Mother's Embrace
You people have such dirty minds! You probably thought it was something else, didn't you? HA! It's about the Moon, you silly peoples! But I love you dirty minded freaks, still. You amuse me. *cuddles*
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#2 2009-02-14 12:27:04
- DarkStage
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- Registered: 2009-02-09
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Re: Mother's Embrace
Interesting.. I came in expecting a 'nurtured by mother' love poem. (No, not what you thought I was thinking:) but I see signs of that subliminally written, regardless that its 'just the moon'
).
It is hard for me to imagine the moon as a mother figure in any metaphor.. but that's me I guess
DarkStage
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#3 2009-02-16 00:48:12
- edvardlavea
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- From: Whistler. B.C. Canada
- Registered: 2007-10-09
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Re: Mother's Embrace
Not at all what i was expecting... nonetheless a beautiful poem. thank you!
The only limit to our realization of tomorrow will be our doubts of today - Franklin D. Roosevelt
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