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#1 2008-01-08 20:40:22
Things That Go Bump
Things That Go Bump
Mark Brenner never thought he was extraordinary in any way. As the summer after his freshman year begins, he discovers how wrong he was and how sometimes being special isn't so great.
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#2 2008-01-09 20:18:52
- advancewar
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Re: Things That Go Bump
i like it im wondering were your gonna take it and cant wait for more
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#3 2008-01-10 02:39:34
- Corvis
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Re: Things That Go Bump
Thank you advancewar 
I hope that you will enjoy the story as it unfolds
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#4 2008-01-15 23:29:30
- Black Rose
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Re: Things That Go Bump
I read this and, like everything else of yours I've read, I would like to see more. There were a few grammatical errors in there, but I'm afraid I wasn't marking them as I read, sorry. Fat lot of help that is, I know. On the whole, I am interested and eagerly waiting to see what kind of "thing that goes bump" Mark turns out to be. Keep plugging away!
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"Being a writer is a very peculiar sort of a job: it's always you versus a blank sheet of paper (or a blank screen) and quite often the blank piece of paper wins." – Neil Gaiman
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#5 2008-01-17 02:56:38
- Corvis
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Re: Things That Go Bump
Hi Black Rose
Sorry about those obvious grammatical errors. I was too impatient to post and didn't get the chapter proofread. I'm happy that you enjoyed it despite my mistakes and I'm working on chapter two now. (up to about 1600 words at the moment)
I will keep plugging away 
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#6 2008-02-02 23:28:44
- Alq
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Re: Things That Go Bump
can u write more of the things that go bump story
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#7 2008-02-03 01:31:45
- Eric Storm
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Re: Things That Go Bump
I believe he said he was working on Chapter 2...
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#8 2008-02-11 22:33:55
- Corvis
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yes, thank you Eric. I am still working on chapter two.
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#9 2008-02-14 11:18:31
- Alq
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Re: Things That Go Bump
THIS IS A GREAT STOREY PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE
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#10 2008-02-15 05:32:06
- Loki
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I am really like this story Corvis and I like the possibilities. I will now sit back and patiently wait for the next installment. Keep up the great work.
Loki
(posted from Ordeal)
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#11 2008-02-17 11:40:17
- Alq
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Re: Things That Go Bump
This as a realy good story please continue
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#12 2008-02-19 05:46:34
- Corvis
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Re: Things That Go Bump
Hello Loki and Alq. Thank you both for your input. I hope that the wait will not be unbearably long for the next chapter.
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#13 2008-03-06 05:47:22
- Alq
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Re: Things That Go Bump
that was really good please contine
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#14 2008-03-20 05:07:35
- Alq
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its really good so far please continue
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#15 2008-03-25 02:24:45
- Xaiverphoenix89
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I'm liking it so far its very intriguing:) not enough story with empathy if you ask me keep up the good work
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In the burning ashes rises THE PHOENIX !
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#16 2008-03-25 02:50:45
- Xaiverphoenix89
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Re: Things That Go Bump
now i'm very intersted cant wait to read the next one
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#17 2008-03-26 02:58:06
- Corvis
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Re: Things That Go Bump
Thank you, Xaiverphoenix89. I'm happy that you enjoyed the first two chapters of TTGB. I hope that you will enjoy chapter three as much and that my continued efforts will be as enjoyable.
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#18 2008-04-04 17:13:51
- Txthumper
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Look forward to seeing how you continue the plot. Keep up the good work
(posted from School)
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#19 2008-04-10 06:44:53
- Corvis
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Thank you, Txthumper. I hope that you will continue to enjoy the story. By the way, I posted corrections to the first three chapters. I'm sure there are lots of errors I missed, but I hope that I fixed some of the worst grammar mistakes.
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#20 2008-06-24 10:06:51
- NemesisQ
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Darn you for keeping me up late reading the newest chapter (4). /sarcasm
Keep up the good work, can't wait to read more.
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#21 2008-06-29 19:31:19
- Corvis
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Hello. NemesisQ
Sorry to have kept you up, but I'm very happy that you enjoyed the chapter I hope the wait for the next update will not be so long as this one was.
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#22 2008-06-29 22:25:05
- Black Rose
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I also liked this chapter, although I had several distractions that kept me from reading it with anything resembling promptness. Keep up the good work, don't get discouraged, write more... :-)
Black Rose
"Being a writer is a very peculiar sort of a job: it's always you versus a blank sheet of paper (or a blank screen) and quite often the blank piece of paper wins." – Neil Gaiman
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#23 2008-08-03 03:48:03
- circum
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INSANELY EFFING GOOD. My typical evil-overlord response would be to threaten you with disembowelment or another hideous punishment if you don't GIVE ME THE REST ALL RIGHT NOW; however, I've found that that isn't a good way to get authors to do anything (except kill the main characters to spite you), so I'll settle for giving you a high five and ominous smile.
Keep up the good work!
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#24 2008-08-05 14:03:35
- Corvis
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Thank you, Circum. I'm very pleased that you are enjoying the story so much. I am working on the new chapter as rapidly as I can, which isn't as fast as I'd like, but one must do one's best and hope it is enough.
By the way, which character did you want me to kill to spite you?
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#25 2008-12-27 23:58:43
- Timotheos
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Hey Corvis, great job on the story so far, keep up the good work ^_^.
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