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#1 2021-08-11 02:52:08

Bridget
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Experiment 47

Experiment 47

Unplanned drug interaction generates mind control


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#2 2021-08-14 17:22:34

Pleidius
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From: four corners area, NM
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Re: Experiment 47

I pulled back the second and third chapters of Experiment 47.  While editing before posting I was finding too many plot holes and errors in continuity.  Hopefully, I'll get it all fixed and reposted eventually.

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#3 2021-08-23 05:10:17

Pleidius
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Re: Experiment 47

Getting continuity errors fixed. 

Re-edited chapters up and more to cum

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#4 2021-08-31 00:05:37

ptbrainum
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Registered: 2019-05-13
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Re: Experiment 47

Enjoying this, reminding me a bit of 'the book' and 'hierarchy of needs'

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#5 2021-08-31 14:53:34

Pleidius
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From: four corners area, NM
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Re: Experiment 47

Thank you for the comment
I've been trying to work with the 'with great power comes great responsibility' idea
and trying to show the protagonist's growth as he deals with the growing complexity of his life

and trying not to write myself into a corner . . .

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