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#1 2020-05-10 18:58:20

Bridget
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[REMOVED] Slave to my Cousin

AT THE REQUEST OF THE AUTHOR, THIS STORY HAS BEEN REMOVED FROM THE SITE.


Slave to my Cousin

Caught in an embarrassing situation, with pictures!  I am blackmailed by my older cousin into months of slavery.


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#2 2020-05-14 11:47:06

DoomCock
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Re: [REMOVED] Slave to my Cousin

Story includes "teen", "young" and "bb" codes as well.  Good read, if a bit disjointed in places.  Good format too, easy to read.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#3 2020-05-14 17:06:46

Clonus
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From: Prime Material Plane
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Re: [REMOVED] Slave to my Cousin

Made a few adjustments in the story codes.  The two characters are 13 and 18/19.  Thanks for pointing it out.

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#4 2020-05-14 20:55:57

Eric Storm
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Re: [REMOVED] Slave to my Cousin

If the characters are aged as you say, then you are missing the 'teen' code, 'pedo' doesn't apply, and your appropriate pairing code is "mM".  12/13 is the changeover point between the various codes.  12 and under uses the "young"-related codes, and 13 and over use the "teen"-related codes.

Thus, your story codes should be modified thus:  bd, coer, ds, first, inc, sm, teen, ws, mM  (I am assuming the other codes are correct, as I have not read the story.)

Also, for future reference, 'young' implies a willing act, so if the acts in the story are all coercive, then "young" would not apply.  In short, "young" and "pedo" cannot refer to the same scene, as they are mutually exclusive.  (One is fully consensual, the other is coercive.)  This is why both codes exist.

Explaining not just for the author's benefit, but so everyone understands the differences.

Eric Storm


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#5 2020-05-15 02:08:58

Clonus
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Re: [REMOVED] Slave to my Cousin

I'll get the hang of it!

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#6 2020-05-15 02:44:49

Eric Storm
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Re: [REMOVED] Slave to my Cousin

3dsmile

No worries.

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#7 2020-06-01 19:43:13

Clonus
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Re: [REMOVED] Slave to my Cousin

I have added a note at the description of the story.  This IS NOT fiction! This is a True Story and was my introduction to D&S and a lot of other kinks!  I originally wrote it out in a series of emails with an on line friend.  (It is funny how much easier it is to open up to someone a thousand miles away who you will, likely, never meet!) And only stitched the posts together to put up here as an after thought.  Anyway, enjoy.

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#8 2020-06-01 19:51:44

Eric Storm
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Re: [REMOVED] Slave to my Cousin

Well, now we're back to revising your story codes!  3dsmile 

If this is, indeed, a true story, then you need to add the "Non-fiction" genre to your codes.  Whether you keep the "Drama" genre is up to you.

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#9 2020-06-02 01:24:31

Clonus
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Re: [REMOVED] Slave to my Cousin

Ooops! Fixed.

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#10 2020-07-10 22:55:17

Sensualist
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Registered: 2019-10-15
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Re: [REMOVED] Slave to my Cousin

I couldn't bear to read most of this story. So sorry this happened to you.

(posted from Chapter 1)

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#11 2020-07-17 03:04:49

Clonus
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From: Prime Material Plane
Registered: 2020-05-09
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Re: [REMOVED] Slave to my Cousin

Thank you.
I suppressed it for a long time, but it was very formative, for better or worse.

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#12 2020-07-30 05:23:12

Eric Storm
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Re: [REMOVED] Slave to my Cousin

At the request of the author, this story has been removed from the site.

As such, this thread has been locked from future posts.


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