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#1 2019-05-05 07:06:01

Bridget
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Ashes

Ashes

The family raised him not to use his ability on those without the ability. The world isn't supposed to know the family exists. Or families. When he uses it to defend himself and is seen without knowing who it was, his world turns upside down on him.

She was trapped in a fear she found crippling for leaving the house. Her hopes might be realized if she finds someone who can alleviate the fear.

They grew close during college, then one of them disappeared. When she turns up again, it turns the world upside down for both of them.

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#2 2019-05-06 16:57:10

Josh.Bond
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Re: Ashes

awsome story! Can't wait to see what happens next!

(posted from Introduction. / Chapter One)

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#3 2019-05-09 06:09:15

Maverick7508
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Re: Ashes

Good to see a story come together. I like it when creativity, writing and character building make a decent story. May your muse visit you often.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#4 2019-05-09 21:16:53

Neitherspace
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From: Silver City
Registered: 2006-12-03
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Re: Ashes

I'm enjoying this story i have questions but they can wait till after the story gets further

(posted from Chapter Four)


"I figure that if you can't write decent dialogue for the devil, maybe you shouldn't be a writer."-Richard Kadrey

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#5 2019-05-10 01:21:11

Blackie
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Registered: 2017-07-12
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Re: Ashes

I do hope you're patient. I'm all of 5k words into chapter five.


-Himself

"Typos are very important to all written form. It gives the reader something to look for so they aren't distracted by the total lack of content in your writing." -Randy K. Milholland

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#6 2019-05-14 03:57:07

Blackie
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Re: Ashes

The present delay is due to a combination of work, spending time with my pets, and having qualms about a sticky scene (which is a sex thing) which 1: may be  in the wrong place, 2: is not turning my own crank, 3: could serve better as a tension for a couple of the characters. Oh, and I suspect I am not finding it sensual as intended.

This frustration will end.


-Himself

"Typos are very important to all written form. It gives the reader something to look for so they aren't distracted by the total lack of content in your writing." -Randy K. Milholland

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#7 2019-05-15 09:14:31

Hawkeye273
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Registered: 2016-05-03
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Re: Ashes

Really enjoying the story so far can't wait to find out what is going to happen next

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#8 2019-06-25 01:30:03

Blackie
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Registered: 2017-07-12
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Re: Ashes

Current repost due to blunderous name mixup in text.

(posted from the Item Information Page)


-Himself

"Typos are very important to all written form. It gives the reader something to look for so they aren't distracted by the total lack of content in your writing." -Randy K. Milholland

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#9 2019-07-08 06:45:03

dcvngtn3
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Registered: 2019-03-28
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Re: Ashes

I really enjoyed reading this so far. The building up of a story and introducing the characters worked very well to pull together what seems to be a masterpiece in progress.

I sincerely look forward to reading more!

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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