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#1 2017-04-05 22:01:05
Master PC - Cumming in Cymru
Master PC - Cumming in Cymru
A young Welsh boy discovers the Master PC program.
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#2 2017-04-06 19:36:49
- ChiefRock
- Wasted
- From: Oklahoma
- Registered: 2010-11-29
- Posts: 224
Re: Master PC - Cumming in Cymru
I also like most of the master pc stories. Basically I like yours your writing flows well now if the plot develops, you have a winner
(posted from Chapter 02)
My worst day at sea is better than my best day ashore
I found a home in the navy-but they land airplanes on my roof
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#3 2017-04-07 08:41:36
- Elessar
- Completely Blotto
- Registered: 2009-10-28
- Posts: 396
Re: Master PC - Cumming in Cymru
It's not a GREAT story, but it's not a bad little read. Quick and easy, a few minor grammatical errors but overall I look forward to where it ends up. Don't personally see a big story from it but I'm not imaginative enough.
(posted from Chapter 02)
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#4 2017-04-10 08:37:38
- michaelj96
- Tipsy
- Registered: 2017-03-06
- Posts: 5
Re: Master PC - Cumming in Cymru
A welcome addition to the Master PC universe. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you.
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