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#1 2006-12-17 05:57:09

Bridget
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Winter's Blade

On the eve of the winter solstice, a young woman begins to learn the truth about the family business.

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#2 2006-12-17 06:52:03

Storymaster69
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From: Alberta, Canada
Registered: 2006-11-07
Posts: 329

Re: Winter's Blade

Just read the start to your story.  It looks interesting and I am curious to see what happens next.

(posted from prelude)


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#3 2006-12-17 18:24:16

Imagineer
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Re: Winter's Blade

About Winter's Blade

This is a Christmas story conceived two years ago for the 2004 winter Story Egg. Christmas came and went, and I didn't want to write a short story that I'd have to keep to myself for months, so I wrote "Touching Dream." Then Christmas came and went, so I wrote "Desert." Now Christmas is almost here, and... I'm not going to use that excuse again. And really, the story isn't that Christmasy. So if it's not delivered on time, the world won't end.

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#4 2006-12-17 18:50:52

Micky0077
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Registered: 2006-12-07
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Re: Winter's Blade

Interesting beginning. Curious to see what happens next.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#5 2006-12-29 12:13:51

spuppy
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Registered: 2006-12-08
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Re: Winter's Blade

Very well done. I am looking forward to reading more of the story

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#6 2006-12-29 19:14:51

dv8n
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Posts: 118

Re: Winter's Blade

I won't spoil it but I just had to say ...I can't wait for the next chapter.... 3dbig_smile   this is very entertaining so far


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#7 2006-12-31 18:58:45

dv8n
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Posts: 118

Re: Winter's Blade

ok I just fnished reading winters Blade: draft......it seemed short ( I know it wasn't tho...just me) I want more...more ..please...  your teasing it's not fair......3dsad



Seriously tho...take your time make it right.... just hurry   3dbig_smile

Last edited by dv8n (2006-12-31 18:59:46)


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#8 2007-01-02 01:10:42

dv8n
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Registered: 2006-12-08
Posts: 118

Re: Winter's Blade

I like the way this is shaping up....Posted at chapter Run......It's another small dose..but at least they come quickly  3dbig_smile

(posted from run)


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#9 2007-01-02 03:25:47

Jefferson
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From: East Coast, USA
Registered: 2006-12-03
Posts: 449

Re: Winter's Blade

Howdy,

This needs to be continued quickly. I NEED to know what happens.

Very much enjoying the story. Can't wait for more. (Or was that already obvious?) 3dsmile

(posted from run)

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#10 2007-01-07 04:46:30

Imagineer
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From: Oak Valley
Registered: 2006-11-27
Posts: 214

Re: Winter's Blade

It occurs to me that some people might think that the chapter just posted, the seventh, titled "last," is the end. And then they might take up torches and pitchforks, because it's hardly a satisfactory ending.

It's not the end. "Last" refers to... well, it should be obvious once you've read it.

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#11 2007-01-07 07:23:43

Lycan01
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Registered: 2006-12-04
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Re: Winter's Blade

I really like the story so far. Keep up the good work 3dbig_smile

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#12 2007-01-08 01:07:19

dv8n
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From: East Texas
Registered: 2006-12-08
Posts: 118

Re: Winter's Blade

yes it is obvious once you read it...thank you for the chapter..it's reducing the withdrawls some.... 3dsmile


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#13 2007-01-08 11:55:13

spuppy
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Re: Winter's Blade

Another great chapter 'last'. I can't wait for the next installment. Please keep up the great work.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#14 2007-01-10 04:02:29

dv8n
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From: East Texas
Registered: 2006-12-08
Posts: 118

Re: Winter's Blade

Hey Imagineer, It looks like several people like your story...

...they should it's a good story 3dbig_smile  (another shot to help ease the withdrawl pains )


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#15 2007-01-12 18:51:39

dv8n
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From: East Texas
Registered: 2006-12-08
Posts: 118

Re: Winter's Blade

Oh damn...and the plot thickens...     ...no wonder CENSORED BY IMAGINEER keeps them chained up, CENSORED BY IMAGINEER on CENSORED BY IMAGINEER...  Damn, no CENSORED BY IMAGINEER, no CENSORED BY IMAGINEER, no CENSORED BY IMAGINEER, little no CENSORED BY IMAGINEER cleptomaniacs... CENSORED BY IMAGINEER needs to CENSORED BY IMAGINEER their CENSORED BY IMAGINEER more  3dlol

....that's what I think 3dbig_smile

Great story Imagineer ( I tried not to say anything too Spoiling  3dbig_smile  )

Last edited by dv8n (2007-01-13 01:39:46)


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#16 2007-01-14 02:03:44

Imagineer
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Posts: 214

Re: Winter's Blade

Just posted the next chapter, "trouble."

Also typo fixes for "storm" and "hide."

Last edited by Imagineer (2007-01-14 05:05:36)

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#17 2007-01-16 11:42:46

dv8n
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From: East Texas
Registered: 2006-12-08
Posts: 118

Re: Winter's Blade

Trouble is...finished...where's the rest of it....your making me wait?!?!?!  What have I ever done to you to get treated like this?!?!?    ...WAIT don't answer that  3dbig_smile 

The story is still GREAT... waiting for the next chapter on pins and needles


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#18 2007-01-18 04:33:21

Corvis
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Registered: 2006-11-28
Posts: 87

Re: Winter's Blade

Great story so far.  Thank you for writing it.  It's not ever day I get to see the word macadam in a story 3dsmile

(posted from regret)

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#19 2007-01-24 21:51:10

dv8n
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From: East Texas
Registered: 2006-12-08
Posts: 118

Re: Winter's Blade

...I'm dying....need story...please bring next chapter....Imagineer....I...feel sooooo...weak....it's getting dark...don't leave me without... the next chapter...must get my fix........please...


3dbig_smile


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#20 2007-01-28 18:28:46

Imagineer
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From: Oak Valley
Registered: 2006-11-27
Posts: 214

Re: Winter's Blade

I apologize for the long pause between chapters. Life happens, despite my best efforts to the contrary.

Look for "pitch" next Sunday.

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#21 2007-01-28 22:39:32

dv8n
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From: East Texas
Registered: 2006-12-08
Posts: 118

Re: Winter's Blade

I knew you were cheating on me with LIFE..... HOW DARE YOU!

...I'm enraged bey....... DID YOU SAY NEXT SUNDAY?!?!?!?!   3dbig_smile

YEA   THERE'S GOING TO BE A NEW STORY...A NEW STORY ....A NEW STORY  

*looking around sheepishly*  WHAT?!?!?!  You all know, I'm just doing what you all are thinking   3dbig_smile


Seriously Imagineer just do whatever you got to...we'll....just...um sit here biting our nails 'til you post the next chapter OK?


:lol:

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#22 2007-02-05 03:45:28

J-Man5
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Registered: 2006-12-04
Posts: 5

Re: Winter's Blade

I wonder if the SuperBowl outcome will affect either the story or the posting?  Looking forward to it either way. 

There were not nearly enough good commercials!!!!

J-Man5

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#23 2007-02-05 08:14:44

Imagineer
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From: Oak Valley
Registered: 2006-11-27
Posts: 214

Re: Winter's Blade

Things don't always go according to plan. Couple more days.

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#24 2007-02-06 15:36:49

dv8n
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From: East Texas
Registered: 2006-12-08
Posts: 118

Re: Winter's Blade

*NOTE MY HORRIFIED EXPRESSION* NNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...    It's that bitch LIFE again isn't it....?????   You've been seeing HER all along haven't you?  *sobbing uncontrollablly* WHAT ABOUT ME? ....WHAT ABOUT MY NEEDS?  I DEMAND YOU BREAK IT OFF WITH HER THIS INSTANT!  I'll be at mother's until you do!

Hey I do the jealous thing pretty good huh?  HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHA haha  HA   

3dbig_smile    3dtongue     3dlol   3dsmile      we are ganging up on you  3dbig_smile

side note take your time imagineer I don't want to read some half baked peice of shit you felt forced to write...I want to read the story that you are happy enough with to decide your ready to post it.  3dbig_smile  the rest of this message was for you to get a laugh  3dbig_smile


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#25 2007-02-13 12:55:25

dv8n
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From: East Texas
Registered: 2006-12-08
Posts: 118

Re: Winter's Blade

wow that was worth the wait....but I need more   MORE    MORE   


Did I mention...... Moooooooooorrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeee   Please?


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