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#1 2006-12-07 05:14:55
Just A Thought
Just a thought about someone, a fantasy about what would never be.
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#2 2006-12-16 09:56:01
- dv8n
- Wasted
- From: East Texas
- Registered: 2006-12-08
- Posts: 118
Re: Just A Thought
you have some very interesting "thoughts" I can see this clearly.... 
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#3 2009-02-18 12:45:59
- DarkStage
- Inebriated
- Registered: 2009-02-09
- Posts: 17
Re: Just A Thought
It's like walking thru a video clip in my head. Very instant, quick flash of descriptive lust, although not stated, unnoticed.
I enjoy how the words form the picture so well. It's like I'm in the room listening to the mind. I see the words in her eyes, each line speaks in unnoticed facial expression...head slightly down, eyes upturned, facing the other, slightly glassed. As the images flash thru, she blushed ever so slightly...
then... in the end, the thought POPS like a bubble... and the day goes on.
Poems... They can be just words, or a lifetime of stories...
Great!! Keep em coming!!
Last edited by DarkStage (2009-02-18 14:27:03)
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