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2022-Jun-25 @ 9:25 PM | |
daves.not.here Inebriated Member since 2007-Jun-16 Posts: 36 |
When I started reading this story, it sucked me right in! I read it during any free time I had (real life is a pain sometimes <grin>).
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2022-Jun-25 @ 9:37 PM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5745 |
In case this needs clarifying: ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2022-Jun-26 @ 7:04 AM | |
Snake_eater1960 Contributor Member since 2022-Feb-8 Posts: 33 |
daves.not.here
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2022-Jun-27 @ 12:26 PM | |
daves.not.here Inebriated Member since 2007-Jun-16 Posts: 36 |
Sorry I wasn't clearer. I meant in the entire story, not just chapter 31. I searched the text file and found the error in 1, 13, 20, & 28. I guess the repetition just made it stand out to me.
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2022-Jun-29 @ 1:20 AM | |
Zmaybe Inebriated Member since 2021-Jun-27 Posts: 64 |
I am about to read chapter 32 and noticed your preface about not being a professional writer... I love your writing and appreciate the time you have spent putting together this story and then giving your work to us to enjoy for free. I have not found any works on this site that are perfect, but what difference does that make? None, these are stories put together by talented people, some may be professional, some not, but it is their time and imagination that makes this site what it is, a place to find an escape from the riggers of life and just sit back and enjoy the imaginations of some wonderful authors. Typos and grammar issues be damned, I love reading stories written from the heart. Please keep doing what you do and just remember the majority of your readers love your work for the story and characters, not the minor errors, as long as we can follow and enjoy the story, nothing else matters. ----- |
2022-Jun-29 @ 5:19 AM | |
Glockman22 Inebriated Member since 2016-Apr-28 Posts: 22 |
I love this story looking forward to the next chapter. ----- |
2022-Jun-30 @ 11:13 PM | |
Snake_eater1960 Contributor Member since 2022-Feb-8 Posts: 33 |
Thank You Zmaybe and Glockman22 it is comments like these that encourage me to keep writing. ----- |
2022-Jul-1 @ 9:45 PM | |
sermona Inebriated Member since 2019-Feb-18 Posts: 34 |
Yes you are not a proffessional writer ... you don't get money for writing. ----- |
2022-Jul-13 @ 11:05 AM | |
Glockman22 Inebriated Member since 2016-Apr-28 Posts: 22 |
I love this story more and more with every chapter I feel like I'm on the island with them. ----- |
2022-Jul-25 @ 8:08 AM | |
Zmaybe Inebriated Member since 2021-Jun-27 Posts: 64 |
Chapter 35 was fun. Am looking forward to the further adventure of Dan and Sue...and friends... ----- |
2022-Aug-28 @ 5:13 PM | |
Baldilocks76 Tipsy Member since 2022-Jun-25 Posts: 1 |
I have to say I'm very impressed with this story so far. Already being 38 chapters in, it feels like you have just scratched the surface of where this story could lead. I do hope the words continue to flow, and the chapters continue to excite and entertain. Thank you for what you've gifted us with to this point. ----- |
2022-Sep-2 @ 1:53 AM | |
Snake_eater1960 Contributor Member since 2022-Feb-8 Posts: 33 |
Just a quick note to say THANK YOU to all of my readers and a double Thank You for the many nice comments you have given me. I will continue this story however I may start a book two since this is so much longer than I ever envisioned it would be. Stay tuned for the continued story of Dan, Sue, and their friends. ----- |
2022-Sep-7 @ 5:57 PM | |
Zmaybe Inebriated Member since 2021-Jun-27 Posts: 64 |
Thank you for writing this wonderful tale. I like the direction you are heading and whether it is a continuation of this story or a conclusion and a new story as they move to a different venue is good for me either way.
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2022-Sep-11 @ 12:23 AM | |
Snake_eater1960 Contributor Member since 2022-Feb-8 Posts: 33 |
@Zmaybe, First let me say Thank you for your continued support of this story.
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2022-Sep-11 @ 1:00 AM | |
daves.not.here Inebriated Member since 2007-Jun-16 Posts: 36 |
This is a great story so far! I'm really enjoying reading it. I will probably go back and re-read it from the beginning again. I started reading after chapter 31 was posted, so now it's been a while since I read the earlier parts.
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2022-Sep-14 @ 4:51 AM | |
Mikenc67 Contributor Member since 2022-May-26 Posts: 54 |
Enjoyed the story, especially the action scenes. The repetitive daily minute can be reduced though. Looking forward to book two. ----- |
2023-Jan-16 @ 3:53 AM | |
Dadrepus Inebriated Member since 2023-Jan-12 Posts: 91 |
This is a complete story, not just sex and it is very well though out (chapter 1). ----- Always willing to help. May not be good at it ;-) |
2023-Jan-21 @ 10:38 PM | |
Dadrepus Inebriated Member since 2023-Jan-12 Posts: 91 |
You are a pretty great story teller and the little euphemisms crack me up like: "like a starving man at a Las Vegas buffet''. Very entertaining. Now if could just get the grammar right, it would just be so much better. ----- Always willing to help. May not be good at it ;-) |
2023-Jan-22 @ 3:14 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5745 |
This is a simile, not a euphemism.
Did you honestly expect me to NOT mock you for complaining about someone else's grammar, while screwing up your own? ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2023-May-23 @ 7:56 PM | |
Maverick7508 Inebriated Member since 2012-Feb-4 Posts: 63 |
Restarting after not reading this for a while. Gotta admit, with the cocktail student not being able to control his center of gravity I am surprised that he made it that far. He would have been better off in a different art, though finding one that didn't champion humility or inaction would have been difficult. I got a chuckle out of the collarbone break, since even with toughened bones(which a modern Japanese Jiu Jitsu practitioner would have no reason to have) the impact force to break the collarbone is much higher than that of the scaphoid in her hand. ----- |
2023-May-23 @ 8:26 PM | |
Maverick7508 Inebriated Member since 2012-Feb-4 Posts: 63 |
Pardon me, I had the wrong bone in my previous comment. It was the Metacarpal, not the scaphoid. Though metacarpal fractures don't take much force either, rather they take less. ----- |
2023-May-23 @ 8:28 PM | |
Maverick7508 Inebriated Member since 2012-Feb-4 Posts: 63 |
Still though, I am enjoying the story overall, can't wait to see what waits for me in the rest of this story and into the sequel. ----- |
2024-Jan-18 @ 11:45 PM | |
CalifRef Tipsy Member since 2023-Aug-19 Posts: 5 |
Great beginning to a wonderful, long, story that continues in a 2nd book, and for many chapters. ----- |
2024-Mar-19 @ 10:51 PM | |
CalifRef Tipsy Member since 2023-Aug-19 Posts: 5 |
Still loving this... yes, there are typos, long run-on sentences, confusing descriptions, and missing words, but it's a good, interesting read. I'm enjoying it very much. ----- |
2024-Mar-21 @ 4:24 AM | |
CalifRef Tipsy Member since 2023-Aug-19 Posts: 5 |
Very well done! Tasteful but exciting. Keep it cumming. ----- |