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2020-Jan-26 @ 6:29 PM | |
Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 778 |
DaddyDaug.com ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
2020-Jan-26 @ 6:31 PM | |
MDH1969 Contributor Member since 2019-Jan-9 Posts: 48 |
My newest book, I hope you all enjoy it. ----- |
2020-Jan-28 @ 6:24 AM | |
Elessar Completely Blotto Member since 2009-Oct-28 Posts: 396 |
I had a personal issue with the story, but, that is a personal issue. Has no impact on it being a good or bad story.
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2020-Jan-28 @ 7:30 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5751 |
I was ready to make fun of you for this, Elessar, but I looked at it first. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2020-Jan-28 @ 9:59 AM | |
Elessar Completely Blotto Member since 2009-Oct-28 Posts: 396 |
As I failed to finish reading the story I didn't really have much to go off except for the difficulty reading it.
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2020-Jan-29 @ 12:36 AM | |
MDH1969 Contributor Member since 2019-Jan-9 Posts: 48 |
I would point out that nearly every published book is written in double spaced. That's why I use it as you check nearly any publisher website and they all say double spaced documents. ----- |
2020-Jan-29 @ 6:20 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5751 |
Okay, let's do a test. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2020-Jan-29 @ 10:03 AM | |
Elessar Completely Blotto Member since 2009-Oct-28 Posts: 396 |
Whoops! I didn’t mean to start something. I personally have never read a physically printed book in double spacing... except for a children’s book but that was for easier reading for the child... letters were also like 24 instead of 12, and only like 3-10 words a page. ----- |
2020-Jan-29 @ 12:23 PM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5751 |
ALL the rules are broken in children's books. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2020-Jan-29 @ 10:57 PM | |
Elessar Completely Blotto Member since 2009-Oct-28 Posts: 396 |
So I have noticed. It appears they have been broken for teachers as well. My sons teacher can’t spell.
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2020-Jan-30 @ 12:48 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5751 |
But do they understand the process of spelling? And do they feel good about spelling? (His teacher, not your son.) Because, you know, Common Core isn't really about getting the right answer... ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2020-Jan-30 @ 10:34 AM | |
Elessar Completely Blotto Member since 2009-Oct-28 Posts: 396 |
Couldn’t begin to tell you. Never met her. I get texts from her for reminders about school activities and when to bring his backpack.(some times they just have fun days) ----- |
2020-Apr-18 @ 4:52 PM | |
MDH1969 Contributor Member since 2019-Jan-9 Posts: 48 |
May I say my apologies to anyone who might speak Italian if the Italian in Chapter 10, and later in this book is not perfect. I'm not an speaker of Italian so have had to use a translation program. So blame them if it is not correct. ----- |
2020-Jul-21 @ 5:12 PM | |
himm Tipsy Member since 2020-Jul-21 Posts: 1 |
author, have you decided to abandon the Mary route?
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2020-Aug-18 @ 9:49 AM | |
kojak1818 Inebriated Member since 2020-Aug-6 Posts: 17 |
Bringing Mary into the scenario, then dropping the issue with her was highly disappointing. This gives adequate reason to continue the story with additional chapters where Heather introduces Mary to the videos and encourages her to experiment with Ed. ----- |
2020-Aug-19 @ 6:36 PM | |
MDH1969 Contributor Member since 2019-Jan-9 Posts: 48 |
The book is not over, just finding it hard to focus on writing right now with other things taking precedence. But the Mary situation is not over, and will effect the storyline. Hopefully I will be able to refocus in the next few weeks on my writing. ----- |
2021-Mar-11 @ 7:41 PM | |
mydarkside Contributor Member since 2021-Jan-27 Posts: 28 |
Wow. I love the slow burn on the previous chapters that has lead us to this one.
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2021-Mar-11 @ 7:43 PM | |
mydarkside Contributor Member since 2021-Jan-27 Posts: 28 |
Now that was a big comedown after the last chapter, but so real. Things are only going to progress and I cant wait for Heather t learn to suck cock and swallow her daddies cum ----- |
2021-Mar-12 @ 10:38 PM | |
mydarkside Contributor Member since 2021-Jan-27 Posts: 28 |
Well I didn't have to wait long!!!
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2021-Sep-8 @ 5:52 PM | |
MDH1969 Contributor Member since 2019-Jan-9 Posts: 48 |
So this is the last chapter for this story. I'm sorry that it's taken so long to finish. Writing has been difficult over the last year. And this chapter in particular has felt like pulling teeth to write. At points I was simply staring at the screen not writing anything, or managing to get a few words down at a time. As a result I've ended it a little shorter than I planned. As there was supposed to be a final love scene between Ed and Heather. I'm still not sure if the chapter needs it or not. So for those who do read this, if you feel it needs the extra love scene please say and I'll do my best to add it on.
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2021-Sep-13 @ 9:54 PM | |
mydarkside Contributor Member since 2021-Jan-27 Posts: 28 |
Great addition to the story and a nice mingling of the characters. Who knows where things will go now. ----- |