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Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 778 |
The Crucible ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
| 2018-Dec-26 @ 11:48 AM | |
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Seumus1 Inebriated Member since 2017-Sep-28 Posts: 18 |
Loving the story so far!!! (Ch.9)
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| 2018-Dec-30 @ 12:14 AM | |
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Hightower Tipsy Member since 2013-May-1 Posts: 4 |
Loved the first Chapter imensly! The start felt a bit rushed but from the time in college it was great. (i'm swiss so sorry for any spelling mistakes) ----- |
| 2019-Jan-11 @ 3:48 AM | |
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Blackie Contributor Member since 2017-Jul-13 Posts: 72 |
I may go back and revisit the entire thing. I tried to have it completed before posting anything, and that didn't work out. The size of the file (which was meant to be broken up eventually anyway) got too large so my editing sucked. ----- -Himself "Typos are very important to all written form. It gives the reader something to look for so they aren't distracted by the total lack of content in your writing." -Randy K. Milholland |
| 2023-Jun-28 @ 1:17 AM | |
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Dadrepus Inebriated Member since 2023-Jan-12 Posts: 99 |
Very enjoyable story that came to an acceptable conclusion. Few gramatical and spelling errors. ----- Always willing to help. May not be good at it ;-) |
| 2023-Nov-1 @ 8:11 AM | |
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Dadrepus Inebriated Member since 2023-Jan-12 Posts: 99 |
Second time reading this story and it was just as enjoyable as the first time. ----- Always willing to help. May not be good at it ;-) |