The Crucible

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2018-Dec-23 @ 12:05 AM
Admin
God
Member since 2006-Sep-9
Posts: 511

The Crucible

Dan, Susan, Courtney, Elizabeth, Anne, Cheyenne, Jacob, Ada, Diane, Darlene, and others' lives brush against each other as their goals and fears collide and become trials of conflict.


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2018-Dec-26 @ 11:48 AM
Seumus1
Inebriated
Member since 2017-Sep-28
Posts: 16

Loving the story so far!!! (Ch.9)
Very well-written, with quite good knowledge of the "scene". Looking forward to seeing where things go next.

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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2018-Dec-30 @ 12:14 AM
Hightower
Tipsy
Member since 2013-May-1
Posts: 2

Loved the first Chapter imensly! The start felt a bit rushed but from the time in college it was great. (i'm swiss so sorry for any spelling mistakes)

(posted from Chapter One)


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2019-Jan-11 @ 3:48 AM
Blackie
Contributor
Member since 2017-Jul-13
Posts: 27

Hightower wrote:

The start felt a bit rushed

(posted from Chapter One)

I may go back and revisit the entire thing. I tried to have it completed before posting anything, and that didn't work out. The size of the file (which was meant to be broken up eventually anyway) got too large so my editing sucked.


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