Shouldnt That Scare me More

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2018-May-16 @ 6:21 PM
Bridget
Barmaid
Member since 2006-Sep-9
Posts: 778

Shouldnt That Scare me More

A teenage boy becomes obsessed with his own dick to the point that he starts fantasizing about giving a blowjob to know what it would feel like. The older boy next door helps him, but not exactly the way he had in mind.


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2019-Feb-14 @ 4:28 PM
Clevelandslim14
Tipsy
Member since 2018-Jan-10
Posts: 2

This definitely deserves a third act. Absolutely fun to read.

(posted from Chapter 1)


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2019-Feb-17 @ 9:15 PM
bistander
Contributor
Member since 2015-Sep-3
Posts: 241

Thank you. I may do that then. It received almost no replies despite its positive rating on another site. It was a fun little story and I'm sure I can come up with some more naughty things for the boys to do, or maybe it's the girl who is up to something?


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2021-Aug-16 @ 5:10 AM
Bigjohn
Tipsy
Member since 2021-Aug-13
Posts: 3

Ah mate you took me back to my childhood. I was a bit of a deviate in my younger days. Nice story, your writing style was even good back then. Deserves a post elsewhere.

(posted from Chapter 1)


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2023-Aug-4 @ 7:15 AM
Harddreams
Inebriated
Member since 2023-Jul-25
Posts: 24

this reminded me of an R Crumb comix , laugh my arse off while reading the whole thing, absolutely brilliant.
Graphic description was unbelievable I love the bit with the cornflakes at the beginning.

(posted from Chapter 1)


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2023-Aug-8 @ 5:45 PM
bistander
Contributor
Member since 2015-Sep-3
Posts: 241

Thank you, Harddreams. Comments like that almost make me think I know what I'm doing. Now if I could find more time to actually get good at this shit.


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