My Neighbors Incest

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2016-Sep-17 @ 8:12 PM
Wicked Storm
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That is awesome bistander, it really shows. I am looking foreward to your updates. ^_^


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2017-Jan-24 @ 7:28 PM
saurav_mystery1989
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Good start and awesome till now but still need some more dose of it before I could comment. Would happy to see few more characters in the story.


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2017-Jan-28 @ 9:16 AM
bistander
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saurav_mystery1989 wrote:

Good start and awesome till now but still need some more dose of it before I could comment. Would happy to see few more characters in the story.

Oh, yeah, I forgot, I still need to update the other 15 chapters and load them here. If you care to read the 2009 version, when I knew less about writing, you can go to sexstories under bistander and read it there. I'll try and get some more of them converted and loaded as soon as I finish chapter 16 of Potential.


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2017-Mar-7 @ 5:09 AM
Intruder
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I have read your story on xnxx.com and saw you were on here and followed you here.  Love this story.    Cant wait to read more 
Thank you

(posted from Chapter 2: Brains, Balls or Just Plain Evil?)


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2017-Aug-7 @ 11:11 AM
HendrixMorton
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Intruder wrote:

I have read your story on xnxx.com and saw you were on here and followed you here.  Love this story.    Cant wait to read more 
Thank you

(posted from Chapter 2: Brains, Balls or Just Plain Evil?)

Seems that the other site has removed all but one chapter of this story (My Neighbor's Incest Part VI (revised))....Never got to finish it...Is there another site that might be hosting it?


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2017-Aug-9 @ 8:39 AM
bistander
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Can you believe that, after eight years, they removed that story and I assume that is also why I found myself banned from the site last week. It would have been nice if they at least told me why.

HendrixMorton, you have two options. One, wait for me to finish moving it to this site, rewritten as the first three chapters were. The other, you could email me and I will send you the copies of the chapters as they were on XN. Would have to be openoffice files or text files, though.


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2017-Aug-9 @ 11:19 AM
HendrixMorton
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bistander wrote:

Can you believe that, after eight years, they removed that story and I assume that is also why I found myself banned from the site last week. It would have been nice if they at least told me why.

HendrixMorton, you have two options. One, wait for me to finish moving it to this site, rewritten as the first three chapters were. The other, you could email me and I will send you the copies of the chapters as they were on XN. Would have to be openoffice files or text files, though.

Email sent...And Thanks!


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2017-Aug-25 @ 7:20 AM
Fenixreign
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XNXX.com regularly does purges now if anyone HINTS at under 18 sex.  One of the main reasons Magusfang moved off there.


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2017-Aug-27 @ 1:52 AM
bistander
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Fenixreign wrote:

XNXX.com regularly does purges now if anyone HINTS at under 18 sex.  One of the main reasons Magusfang moved off there.

Yup, I'm sure that someone did more than a hint. Afterall, the stories had been there for 8 years.

Had I known about The Pub, I wouldn't have gotten back involved with that site. Unfortunately, now I have to finish this story over there.


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2017-Aug-27 @ 3:21 AM
Eric Storm
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Um... why?  Just redirect your readers here.  Rewriting a story to meet a site's restrictions doesn't strike me as a good idea unless they're going to pay you for it.

Eric Storm


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2017-Aug-28 @ 1:03 PM
Sniper
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I am with Eric on this topic. If that site puts such constrictions on its authors it is time to leave. Point you readers to the Pub and post your story here. If there is no money involved just go with the best site there is.


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2017-Aug-29 @ 6:56 PM
Fenixreign
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I also concur with Eric.  As long as you continue to post here, your reader base will be able to find you.


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2017-Sep-2 @ 12:46 AM
bistander
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Eric Storm wrote:

Um... why?  Just redirect your readers here.  Rewriting a story to meet a site's restrictions doesn't strike me as a good idea unless they're going to pay you for it.

Eric Storm

Yup, I agree also, and if you look through the comments on my stories over there, that's what I have been doing. I tell them everything comes here first and it is uncensored. I'd tell them in the story but that will get me banned, too.


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2017-Sep-21 @ 1:18 PM
Forgotten_Angel
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Hoping you have had time to edit the remaining chapters of this story so that you can post them soon. Great start!

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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2018-Mar-12 @ 2:51 AM
mwahoo
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Admin wrote:

My Neighbors Inceat

A story about a boy who discovers his neighbor's incestuous behavior. He uses his discovery to try and blackmail the hot teenager next door. He gets a whole lot more than he expected.

did this actually sell as a book under another author?  Saw it on Wattpad for a while offered as a book


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2018-Mar-12 @ 6:55 PM
bistander
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mwahoo wrote:

Admin wrote:

My Neighbors Inceat

A story about a boy who discovers his neighbor's incestuous behavior. He uses his discovery to try and blackmail the hot teenager next door. He gets a whole lot more than he expected.

did this actually sell as a book under another author?  Saw it on Wattpad for a while offered as a book

If it did, I want my fuckin' money! I'd like a link to where you saw it. I saw it on another for-profit site posted by someone as if they wrote it. I joined the site just to tell them they didn't, but they never responded.
I wrote this in 2009 on sexstories. They recently pulled it down because their rules changed.


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2019-Feb-21 @ 1:03 AM
DoomCock
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More to cum, I hope?  If this is an old story and all you need is editing before reposting, I volunteer my services as editor to get this posted up here sooner.

Can't wait to see more!

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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2019-Feb-21 @ 10:14 AM
bistander
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DoomCock wrote:

If this is an old story and all you need is editing before reposting, I volunteer my services as editor to get this posted up here sooner.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

That is true, it's an old story. One of the first I wrote and posted. What I have been doing is going through the chapters and trying to apply the things I have learned since 2009 without rewriting the story. I'm not sure that is something you'd be able to do. If you wanted to, you could go read the only chapter left on sexstories, which has already been redone and posted here. That will give you an idea of what I have been doing.

I have been so busy with life that any spare time I get has been going toward Potential, so the reworking of My Neighbor's has ground to a halt. I hate that because I want it to be as good as it can be. I have given desperate fans the original OpenOffice files and let them read my poorly written stuff.


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2020-Apr-29 @ 10:29 PM
ralphev
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getting better

(posted from Chapter 4: What happened in Pennsylvania?)


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2021-Jan-28 @ 9:36 PM
mydarkside
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Wow, hot as fuck! I think this is even better than Potential, considering how long ago it was since you wrote it.

I wish I had a sister like either of these two.

(posted from Chapter 2: Brains, Balls or Just Plain Evil?)


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2021-Jan-28 @ 9:52 PM
mydarkside
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Very. very nice. If only all neighbours were this friendly.

(posted from Chapter 3: Protect Her From the Sun)


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2021-Jan-28 @ 10:15 PM
mydarkside
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It seems like gardening payments have a different way of being taken in the USA.

Joe needs to do Susan ASAP, please

(posted from Chapter 4: What happened in Pennsylvania?)


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2021-Jan-28 @ 10:45 PM
mydarkside
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Ahh, every young boy needs an older woman to guide him.

Great story. I've binged read the whole series todate in one session. Not done that for a long time.

Stunning.

(posted from Chapter 5: First Day of School)


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2021-Mar-23 @ 10:19 PM
bistander
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mydarkside love the username, and My Neighbors is from my darker side :-)
Thanks for the comments. I guess I should get off my ass and post the rest of these chapters. All they need is a little proofing.


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2021-Mar-26 @ 1:21 AM
bistander
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The first 5 chapters are being reposted with the new ones so I can get all the formats the same.
It's scary how much time went past since I started posting this without me finishing the edits.
Sorry.

(posted from Chapter 1: The Attic)


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