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2016-Mar-9 @ 4:45 AM | |
Rescue25 Wasted Member since 2014-Jul-7 Posts: 122 |
I note, looking back, that this is listed as complete. To me this has the beginnings pf a great series. Hope you will continue with it. ----- |
2016-Mar-19 @ 2:00 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
It is being worked on as we speak book 2 is being written and is several chapters into its creation, but I won't be post it until i have at least five chapters written. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2016-Mar-19 @ 12:08 PM | |
thehilz Completely Blotto Member since 2010-Sep-7 Posts: 368 |
Glad to hear that. This and brimstone were two I enjoyed a lot ----- |
2016-Mar-20 @ 1:31 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
Yes brimstone has more content just is on a small break hit a plot bunny wall still trying to clear them like weeds. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2016-Aug-4 @ 6:05 PM | |
Lacy69 Inebriated Member since 2016-Jun-21 Posts: 38 |
Nicely written and can not wait to see were you take the second book. Will definitely keep track and hope you will post soon with the book 2 ----- |
2016-Aug-12 @ 9:24 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
Thank you Lacy, book two does have a bit of work done on it so far. I am however like a lot of authors taken where my fancy wants me to go. Write now I am writing a Fan-story but more in a genre then a direct homage to any characters. Of course that would be Star Trek haha. Anyways, Thanks for the complement, and I look forward to more comments from you. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2016-Aug-18 @ 8:27 PM | |
Sniper Inebriated Member since 2016-Jul-5 Posts: 94 |
OK...where to start? You really built an interesting and promissing storyline. The end left me longing to read more of Harika and her family. ----- |
2016-Aug-18 @ 11:09 PM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5751 |
I notice you failed to offer to proofread for her... ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2016-Aug-19 @ 12:56 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
The version of Archon you are reading is like 1.5 of the edited version of the story. It is a completed narrative of the first book. However, it is still in the draft process of the story. I have edited two chapters fully in the last year, that I haven't uploaded yet, because I need to have some one proof read them again, because I am actually tired of post about my Grammar and Spelling issues. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2016-Oct-6 @ 5:39 PM | |
BoneThugz Tipsy Member since 2016-Aug-22 Posts: 4 |
**Possible error?**
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2016-Oct-6 @ 11:25 PM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5751 |
Just a note, BoneThugz: This sort of issue is better handled through email. There's not really any "discussion" to be had about such errors, and some authors will find it embarrassing to have their errors aired publicly. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2016-Oct-7 @ 12:30 AM | |
BoneThugz Tipsy Member since 2016-Aug-22 Posts: 4 |
Sorry about that, I meant to click the email option but went back to finish reading the chapter after spotting it.
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2016-Oct-7 @ 4:12 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5751 |
No worries. Shit happens. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2017-Jan-4 @ 1:24 PM | |
Sniper Inebriated Member since 2016-Jul-5 Posts: 94 |
@Wicked Storm ----- |
2017-Jan-5 @ 1:01 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5751 |
My original point still stands, then, Sniper: If you're not willing to help fix the problem, don't bitch about it. Either accept the quality of the work as it is, or don't read it. No one (and this goes not just for authors, but every person on the planet) needs to hear others' naked complaints. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2017-Jan-9 @ 4:52 PM | |
Sniper Inebriated Member since 2016-Jul-5 Posts: 94 |
If that makes me a flamer, then so be it. Maybe not how I would have classified the comment. Being a former blogger and therefore also having been on the receiving end, I have seen my share of flames. No matter my intentions, it is important, how it is being perceived. ----- |
2017-Jan-9 @ 8:33 PM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5751 |
Actually, I would not have called your post flaming... just bitching. But bitching's not any more useful than flaming, just less personal. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2017-Jan-28 @ 12:16 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
It has been proofed a few times, it has been read aloud a few times, and it's even gone through a couple of edits. I take all criticism in any form in email formats, because I am more then willing to see what others have to say, because sometimes there is a little glimmer of help even in the most scathing of critiques. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2017-Feb-12 @ 7:52 AM | |
Halthasar Tipsy Member since 2013-Jun-2 Posts: 8 |
Ignore the flamers, imo. But that's just my opinion... lol. ----- |
2017-May-19 @ 10:45 PM | |
Jack Tempest Tipsy Member since 2016-Apr-14 Posts: 9 |
I myself, am Far from being the most skilled on this planet at proofing through for grammatical and spelling errors, however, if it is, i shall gladly offer myself available to help out where i can. ----- |
2017-Jun-1 @ 6:18 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
Ahh, this is a completed book in the series lol, Archon 2 is underway, but sadly i bite off a lot of stuff, so I have a few stories all being written at the same time because i have so many idea's running around it's not even funny. then of course you get into the editing phase of things, and your like, i don't know where i want to spend my energy creating or honing. None the less I will never be giving up on Archon, just might be a while before i post more on it. As to proofing and editing, if people are interested use the send email feature on the forum and i will talk to you there. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2017-Dec-12 @ 2:30 AM | |
Opthimus Tipsy Member since 2017-Dec-11 Posts: 1 |
One of the best erotic novels I have ever read! Keep em coming plz! ----- |
2020-Oct-2 @ 1:37 AM | |
kojak1818 Inebriated Member since 2020-Aug-6 Posts: 17 |
Leaving such a ridiculous waste of space between paragraphs I find quite annoying. It breaks the continuity and smooth flow of the story. ----- |
2020-Oct-2 @ 2:13 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5751 |
This is your final warning, Kojak. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2024-Mar-17 @ 8:23 PM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
This novel is going through a re-write. So formatting and other issues should be resolved through that. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |