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2006-Nov-29 @ 9:31 AM
Bridget
God
Member since 2006-Sep-9
Posts: 521

He didn't even know about the war until it busted down the door to his home. Now he's forced to find his way in life, with the help of a little magic. Can he survive long enough to fulfill the promise he made to his mother?

Please read and comment.


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Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide.
2007-Oct-28 @ 2:21 AM
grossclout
Tipsy
Member since 2007-Oct-27
Posts: 2

Good start, but I am looking forward to where you go with this. You've got a good track record, keep up the good work.

(posted from Chapter 1)


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2007-Oct-31 @ 4:56 PM
Yellow Snow
Contributor
Member since 2006-Nov-28
Posts: 34

Thank you. I admit I haven't thought much about this one lately, but for some reason your post makes me want to consider working on it again. No I do NOT intend to put Jesse on the back burner, but I do think I might begin work on this one as well. I seem to be more productive when I'm working on more than one at a time.


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If you give a man a fire, he will be warm for that day, if you set a man on fire, he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
2008-Sep-10 @ 5:39 AM
KeoniHI
Tipsy
Member since 2007-Apr-30
Posts: 1

Well it is a good start but please don't leave us hanging here ok? LOL

(posted from Chapter 1)


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2008-Sep-10 @ 9:18 AM
Eric Storm
Pub Owner
Member since 2006-Sep-13
Posts: 4429

I would not expect any continuation of any of Night Wolf's stories.  He hasn't been seen online in months.

Eric


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2008-Sep-26 @ 9:11 AM
gadget
Inebriated
Member since 2007-Jul-19
Posts: 21

would like to see more of this.

(posted from Chapter 1)


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2008-Dec-24 @ 5:25 AM
Yellow Snow
Contributor
Member since 2006-Nov-28
Posts: 34

Eric was right. He knows the circumstances for why I haven't been around. I am trying to get things going again, hopefully I will be able to.


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If you give a man a fire, he will be warm for that day, if you set a man on fire, he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
2012-Mar-13 @ 11:06 PM
grandad_rufus
Inebriated
Member since 2011-May-24
Posts: 30

It is a great shame when real life interferes. So many good stories never reach their end sad

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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If they give you ruled paper, write the other way.
Grandad Rufus.

It's not that I have a dirty mind, you understand. It's just that so many of my thoughts leave muddy little footprints...
2016-Feb-3 @ 6:23 AM
Rescue25
Wasted
Member since 2014-Jul-7
Posts: 122

Good beginning.  How about some follow up?

(posted from Chapter 1)


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