bistander

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2016-Mar-9 @ 7:59 PM
Bridget
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Member since 2006-Sep-9
Posts: 554

Post General Comments to the Contributor Here.


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2016-Mar-13 @ 4:32 AM
Daddycums
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Member since 2014-Jun-27
Posts: 121

Hi, bistander!

Are you the same bistander I remember from years ago on XNXX?  If so, I take it you've returned from your "extended vacation?"  Good to see you here on the Wolfpub!


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2016-Mar-19 @ 7:29 PM
bistander
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Member since 2015-Sep-3
Posts: 170

Daddycums wrote:

Hi, bistander!

Are you the same bistander I remember from years ago on XNXX?  If so, I take it you've returned from your "extended vacation?"  Good to see you here on the Wolfpub!

I guess you haven't read the comments I posted on your story? Yes, it's me. I survived, but certainly not unscathed. I have PTSD along with many other physical and emotional scars. I've been receiving treatment for a year and trying different medications, but still having issues. I'm finally trying to do some writing. I'd appreciate your feedback on Potential. It's a very long story I wrote on paper, the only thing available at the resort, I've been working to type it in and edit it for awhile. Finally started posting it. I put the first chapter up on XN stories site and on Wolfpub last Friday. Since then I got 10,000 reads and 70 votes and 5 comments on xn, and 200 reads with 1 comment here. But, xn rejected chapter 2 for underage material. oops! Teenagers having sex, imagine that. Hopefully, I can steer some of their readers over here.

I look forward to reading your stuff. I always thought you were one of the best authors over there. I still tell people about the Chair. Loved that one.
Keep in touch. I need all the help I can get.
bistander


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2016-Apr-23 @ 6:48 PM
Reizo
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Member since 2012-Jul-21
Posts: 4



Thank you Bistander, for posting your work here. I followed your work on xn. I loved it, but they censor stuff that shouldn't be. You have a loyal reader here. A fan.

Reizo


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2017-Aug-8 @ 8:57 AM
HendrixMorton
Inebriated
Member since 2017-Aug-4
Posts: 24

Hey there,

Was reading your story "My Neighbors Incest" on the other site, but it seems that the other site has removed all but one chapter of this story (My Neighbor's Incest Part VI (revised))....Never got to finish it...Is there another site that might be hosting it?


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2017-Oct-26 @ 7:08 PM
Todger65
Tipsy
Member since 2017-Mar-17
Posts: 8

Dinner Surprise for Three

Just finished reading this. I liked the twist at the end and the way you kept mentioning yourself. It fitted in perfectly.


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2017-Oct-26 @ 8:35 PM
bistander
Contributor
Member since 2015-Sep-3
Posts: 170

Thanks Todger65. I wasn't going to post it here because it was so specific to that other site, so I glad you enjoyed it. I hope the guy I wrote it for enjoys in and actually gets it to happen.


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2018-Jun-16 @ 4:51 AM
bistander
Contributor
Member since 2015-Sep-3
Posts: 170

Reposts

I had to repost a couple of stories because of a formatting problem. Nothing changed except fixing the issue.


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2018-Jul-25 @ 12:48 PM
Darkside_6
Tipsy
Member since 2016-Aug-10
Posts: 8

Enjoying "Potential"

Really enjoying the story and the build up between the main characters (no spoilers).


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2018-Jul-25 @ 7:39 PM
bistander
Contributor
Member since 2015-Sep-3
Posts: 170

Darkside_6 wrote:

Enjoying "Potential"

Really enjoying the story and the build up between the main characters (no spoilers).

Thank you that means a lot. Hope I can keep up that standard through the end.


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2019-Jan-14 @ 8:59 AM
Anganell Brigette
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Member since 2018-Dec-15
Posts: 3

Me Posting

Hi, I believe you and Eric are friends.  I plan to begin posting some of my short stories here shortly.  I love your work.  I am traveling so hsv3 had no time to read, however I think I am on chapter 17 of POTENTIAL.  I agree with the other commentators, you are the best author on this site.  Let Eriic know as soon as I get another credit card in dollars I will help with donations as well.  Anganell Brigette


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I guess I want to be the next D L James the author of 50 shades of Gray.
Or A N Roquelaure, Anne Rice's pen name for five erotic novels.
2019-Sep-16 @ 3:39 AM
defaultedname
Tipsy
Member since 2019-Aug-25
Posts: 2

great story!

I just wanted to drop in and say that I really like your work! "Potential" is a great series!


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2020-Jul-18 @ 6:45 AM
Sensualist
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Member since 2019-Oct-15
Posts: 6

Hey bistander...good to see you here.


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2020-Aug-9 @ 12:53 AM
bistander
Contributor
Member since 2015-Sep-3
Posts: 170

Sensualist wrote:

Hey bistander...good to see you here.

I should be saying that since I've been here longer, but I'm sorry to say I just saw this message. I hope you're having hurt here.


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2020-Sep-24 @ 12:58 AM
dvahor
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Member since 2017-Dec-1
Posts: 1



Really like this story can’t wait for the next chapter.


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2020-Sep-24 @ 11:51 PM
Eric Storm
Pub Owner
Member since 2006-Sep-13
Posts: 4893

dvahor wrote:



Really like this story can’t wait for the next chapter.

Perhaps this should have been posted to an actual story thread, then?

Eric Storm


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About the Bistander:
I started writing because my regular life fell apart. I was already paralyzed, but the wheels came off the train and I had to start over. Unfortunately, I grew up with a severe learning disability that went untreated, so not only do I have a lot to learn, there's a limit to how much I can do. I hope you won't hold any of that against me, nor will you excuse poor writing. I welcome your feed back.

About my stories:
I write creative, nonfiction—stories based on actual people and events. All names, locations and time-lines are changed to protect the guilty. I add details, alter events and merge story-lines to make good stories while maintaining anonymity.